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Hi


I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not.


If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them.


Thank you very much.


1.The process of game playing benefits people in term of body and mind.


2.Whether the outcome of a game pleased people or not, they had already achieved the purpose of reducing their relentless stress.


3. It was pity that our rival defeated us, but we didn’t care about the result of the game


4.Giving encouragement is the best means by which to arouse our team’s morale.


5.Not only are winners pleasant but also loser enjoy the process of game playing.
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KkHi


I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not.


If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them.


Thank you very much.


1.The process of game playing benefits people in term of body and mind.

The process of playing a/the game benefits......terms.......


2.Whether the outcome of a game pleased people or not, they had already achieved the purpose of reducing their relentless stress.


3. It was pity that our rival defeated us, but we didn’t care about the result of the game (I'm not sure that it could be considered a 'pity' if you 'didn't care about the result...not very logical, it seems to me) Perhaps a 'really' before 'didn't.


4.Giving encouragement is the best means by which to arouse our team’s morale.


5.Not only are winners pleasant but also loser enjoy the process of game playing.


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More possibilities. Notice how the revised sentences are all shorter than the original.

1.The process of game playing benefits people in term of body and mind.

People benefit in body and mind from playing games.


2.Whether the outcome of a game pleased people or not, they had already achieved the purpose of reducing their relentless stress.

Whether or not players are pleased by the outcome of a game, they can find the activity stress-reducing.


3. It was pity that our rival defeated us, but we didn’t care about the result of the game

Although we lost, the defeat was not what really mattered to us.


4.Giving encouragement is the best means by which to arouse our team’s morale.

Giving encouragement is the best way to boost our team's morale.


5.Not only are winners pleasant but also loser enjoy the process of game playing.

Winners or losers, all players can enjoy the process of the game.