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I'm writing small paragraph about how i met my 3 friends. Please check if any grammar mistake ?

XXXX is my first best friend. I met him in 6th grade. I was acting tough, and cool during that time. But he didn't back away because of that. We soon found out we both had many same hobbies. From that time, I met my true friend in my life. He helped me so much. Our friendship got better in 7th grade. We both got into the same class. We helped each other out when we were in troubles. I still could remember how he helped me when I got pushed by someone. I'll never forget that. He's my true friend.

Actually, the first time I met him, I never thought we could be best friend. Happened in 6th grade, I got a friend that told me he got bully by some guy. Yeah, and that's xxx. At lunch, I went to him and I talked to him. He didn't really cares about me that time, but in 7th grade. We got to know each other more at every lunch time. We both loves playing video games, we talked about girls and other. Finally, in 8th grade, we became best friend along with xxx and xxx.

xxx, I couldn't really sure how he become my best friend. I really don't know. I remember he came to my class in 7th grade. A that time, I didn't know how he knew me. He just called my name, and he looks very bully. xxx and xxx didn't like him that much. I only chatted with him few times in the whole year. In 8th grade, xxx got into the same class with me. I got to know him more like how I did with xxx and xxx. I found out that he's not a bad guy, he just didn't find friends like us. At the end, xxx, xxx, xxx, all became my best friend in my life.
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XX is my first best friend. I met him in 6th grade. I was acting tough, (don't put a comma here) and cool during that time. But he didn't back away because of that. We soon found out we both had many of the same hobbies. At From that time, I met my true friend in my life. He helped me so much. Our friendship got better in 7th grade. We both got into the same class. We helped each other out when we were in troubles (in trouble). I still can could remember how he helped me when I got pushed by someone. I'll never forget that. He's my true friend.

Actually, the first time I met him, I never thought we could be best friends. It happened in 6th grade; (Period or semi-colon here) I had got a friend who that told me he got bullied by some guy. Yeah, and that's was xxx. At lunch, I went to him and I talked to him. He didn't really cares (care) about me that time, but in 7th grade (no period here) we got to know each other more at every lunch time (or - "during lunch period"). We both loved playing video games; we talked about girls and other things. Finally, in 8th grade, we became best friends along with xxx and xxx.

As for xxx, I can't couldn't really be sure how he became my best friend. I really don't know. I remember he came to my class in 7th grade. At that time, I didn't know how he knew me. He just called my name, and he looked very like a big bully. xxx and xxx didn't like him that much. I only chatted with him few times in the whole year. In 8th grade, xxx got into the same class with me. I got to know him more like the way how I did with xxx and xxx. I found out that he's not a bad guy, he just didn't find(instead of "find" you can use "have many") friends like us. At the end, xxx, xxx, xxx, all became my best friends in my (say "for life" if you expect they will be your friends forever) life.

These are nice essays; I enjoyed reading them. Good job!
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thanks for the editting.