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I would appreciate if someone could check to see if I need to revise anything before I turn it it. Thanks in advance.

In the Monkey, by Wu Che’eng en, the Monkey symbolizes intellect, strength, and courage; he played a major role by accompanying a monk named Tripitaka who is fearful and easily deceives to the West to get the Buddhist scriptures. Later they came across two other disciples known as the Pigsy and Sandy. From there, they will embark on a journey with full of actions and adventures. This fairy tale tells me that if we work together and help each other bringing their own talent could be great advantages to whatever we do.
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In The Monkey, by Wu Che’eng en, the monkey symbolizes intellect, strength, and courage; he plays a major role in the tale by accompanying a monk, Tripitaka, who is fearful and easily deceives to the West to obtain some Buddhist scriptures. Later they come across two other disciples, the Pigsy and Sandy. From there, they embark on a journey full of action and adventures. This fairy tale tells us that working together and helping each other, using our own talent, can be a great advantage in whatever we do.

I don't understand the underlined part, mountain, but I'm sure that the phrasing is wrong.
Mister MicawberIn The Monkey, by Wu Che’eng en, the monkey symbolizes intellect, strength, and courage; he plays a major role in the tale by accompanying a monk, Tripitaka, who is fearful and easily deceives to the West to obtain some Buddhist scriptures. Later they come across two other disciples, the Pigsy and Sandy. From there, they embark on a journey full of action and adventures. This fairy tale tells us that working together and helping each other, using our own talent, can be a great advantage in whatever we do.

I don't understand the underlined part, mountain, but I'm sure that the phrasing is wrong.
Mister Micawber, I appreciate your help. What the underline part means is that the Tripitaka who is fearful and easily maybe there should be "and heading to the West"???there should be something that connect with them heading to get the Buddhist scriptures but I don't know how to link it together.
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OK-- the first problem is 'easily'-- it makes no sense as an adjective decribing the monk. Do you mean that the monk is easily deceived (by other people)? In that case, you don't need any further linkage (gullible = easily deceived):

...he plays a major role in the tale by accompanying a fearful and gullible monk, Tripitaka, to the West to obtain some Buddhist scriptures.
Mister, you don't know how much I appreciate your help, words can't describe it, please keep up the good work. Thank you
I need someone to checkmy thesis statement before I submit it, My essay topic is " The Severity of Drug Addiction and the Affects on the American Family.

My thesis statment is stated below:

The Severity of Drug Addiction and the Affects it has on the American Family will be explored through the detailing of knowing the symptoms’, signs, treatment and the intervention within the family

Please tell me how I can check the status of this.
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WAY TOO LONG. ONE SENTENCE MAX.

Hi Anon,
Were you talking to the person who posted in 2006? Or the one who posted in 2007? Emotion: smile

You'll be able to help people more effectively if the post is recent and they are likely to still be around to read it. I suspect that essay was turned in quite a while ago!
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