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Is there anything about this you would change?

Jeff is angry. He jumps up on the table and starts to move towards his boss sitting at the end of it. His boss rises and stumbles back against the window. Jeff starts running, reaches the end of the table and jumps. But just as he does, his boss steps forward and punches him in the stomach.

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It reads like stage directions. You need to draw a better picture if it is for a story.