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My topic: Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

My essay:

Nowadays, the Internet have strong impact on people in all aspects, young people tend to use the Internet regularly. There is an increasingly popular claim that using online courses instead of delivering class has become an issue which arouses an enormous controversy over recent years. To a certain extent, I think this is a positive development. However, I also believe that online learning has some drawbacks that we need to concern.

There are plausible reasons for supporting benefits from remote learning.First, learning from home is considered a good way for students to get a certificate or diploma without going to school. You can learn everything that you love from all corners of the globe with only a computer connected with wi-fi. By this way, a business, a worker or even a wife also can broaden their knowledge by taking a course that is suitable their schedule. Take my mother as an example, from a traditional woman, she became a modern housewife with great knowledge in nutrition on taking care of my family with course about cooking, nutrient for kids….It is also important to realize that online learning is the best way to save the money. With no face to face classes, the universities can save a mount of money with no electric bills and facilities.

On the other hand, online learning has positive aspects for those who are not self-disciplined. There are many things which will distract you when you learning at home. This could be exemplified by a message on messenger, a bark from neighborhood’s dog, or asking for favors from someone. But with the determination on your mind, this can become a chance for yourself to hone your attractive skill which is a essential in everyone’s success. But with the determination on your mind, this can become a chance for yourself to hone your attractive skill which is an essential in everyone’s success.

In conclusion, while there are several certain disadvantages of online courses, I believe that the advantages far outweigh the drawbacks.

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Nowadays, the Internet have (subject/verb mismatch) a strong impact on people in all aspects, (wrong expression. Do you mean of all income levels, of all ages, or over the entire world?) young people tend to use the Internet regularly. There is an increasingly popular claim that using online courses instead of delivering class (wrong expression.) has become an issue which arouses an enormous controversy (That is blatantly untrue. It is excessively hyperbolic. The reader is not attracted to your essay because they now have the impression that the entire essay will be filled with lies. Grossly exaggerated claims are very, very bad in a formal essay. ) over recent years. To a certain extent, I think this is a positive development. However, I also believe that online learning has some drawbacks that we need to concern. (wrong usage.)


There are plausible reasons for supporting the benefits of from remote learning.First, learning from home is considered a good way for students to get a certificate or diploma without going to school. You can learn everything that you need to know love from all corners of the globe with only a computer connected to the internet. with wi-fi. By In this way, a business, a worker or even a wife (Is a wife an inferior, ignorant or less important person?) also can broaden their knowledge by taking a course that is suitable their schedule. Take my mother as an example, from being a traditional woman, she became a modern housewife with a great knowledge of in nutrition on taking care of my family with after completing a course about cooking, nutrient (wrong word. Also, this is an ungrammatical series.) for kids….It (Do not use ellipses, "etc." or phrases like "and so on" in formal essays.) is also important to realize that online learning is the best way to save the money. With no face to face (hyphenated) classes, the universities can save a mount (wrong word) of money because they do not have to maintain classroom with no electric bills and facilities.

On the other hand, online learning has positive aspects (That means good things, benefits or extra advantages.) for those who are not self-disciplined. There are many things which will distract you when you learning (wrong verb form.) at home. This could be exemplified (wrong word.) by a message on messenger, a bark from neighborhood’s dog, or asking for favors from someone. But with the determination on your mind, this can become a chance for yourself to hone your attractive skill (Which skill are you taking about?) which is a essential (Essential is an adjective. Do not use an article.) in everyone’s success. But with the determination on your mind, this can become a chance for yourself to hone your attractive skill which is an essential in everyone’s success. (Poor style. Repetitive.)

In conclusion, while there are several certain disadvantages of online courses, I believe that the advantages far outweigh the drawbacks.