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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The graph gives information about the total university graduates in both genders in Canada between 1992 and 2007, a period of 15 years.

Overall, both genders show a strong movement upwards. However, the number of females is much more than males in all the given time.

In 1992, there are under 100 000 woman graduated. But it had a slight gradual climb in over 3 years after to 105 000 people. In the next 3 years, although it showed a slight decrease, the line comes to trend again afterwards in 2000 and it reached to just below 150 000 people in 2007.

Meanwhile, in 1992, just about 70 000 men got their degrees and until 1995, it increased to nearly 80 000 people. In the next 3 years, the line showed a movement downwards identically to the line of women and slightly fluctuated from 1998 to 2001. Nonetheless, in 2001, the line went up dramatically to approximately 100 000 people in 2007.

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The (what kind of graph?) graph plots the number of men and women who graduated from gives information about the total university graduates in both genders in Canada between 1992 and 2007, a period of 15 years.


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Aso, I have given you some model sentences for your essay.
The verb tense in sentences describing the data values should be past tense because these events all happened many years ago.


Overall, both genders show a strong movement upwards. (incorrect - genders are not moving. ) However, the number of females is much more than males in all the given time.


Model paragraph: (Two or three significant observations.) 

Overall, the numbers trended higher during the period, with the number of women exceeding men by 30,000 to 50,000 each year. The two curves are highly correlated. There were about 50% more women graduates in 2007 than 1992, compared to 35% for the men.

In 1992, there are (Wrong form) under 100 000 (Wrong form) woman (Wrong form) graduated. (Wrong form)

In 1992, there were slightly less than 100,000 women graduates. 

But it had a slight gradual climb in over 3 years after to 105 000 people.

Their numbers climbed to about 105,000 in 1996. 

In the next 3 years, (very confusing) although it showed a slight decrease, the line comes to trend again afterwards in 2000 and it reached to just below 150 000 people in 2007.

 After decreasing by about 5000 between 1996 and 1999, it continued its upward trend, reaching about  148,000 in 2007. This was a net increase of nearly 50% over the period.

Meanwhile, in 1992, just about 70 000 men got their degrees and until 1995, it increased to nearly 80 000 people. In the next 3 years, the line showed a movement downwards identically to the line of women and slightly fluctuated (Wrong word) from 1998 to 2001. Nonetheless, in 2001, the line went up (??) dramatically to approximately 100 000 people in 2007.

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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The graph gives information about the total university graduates in both genders in Canada between 1992 and 2007, a period of 15 years.

Overall, both genders show a strong movement upwards. However, the number of females is much more than males in all the given time.

In 1992, there are under 100 000 woman graduated. But it had a slight gradual climb in over 3 years after to 105 000 people. In the next 3 years, although it showed a slight decrease, the line comes to trend again afterwards in 2000 and it reached to just below 150 000 people in 2007.

Meanwhile, in 1992, just about 70 000 men got their degrees and until 1995, it increased to nearly 80 000 people. In the next 3 years, the line showed a movement downwards identically to the line of women and slightly fluctuated from 1998 to 2001. Nonetheless, in 2001, the line went up dramatically to approximately 100 000 people in 2007.

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