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The chart illustrates distances traveled per person per week (in kilometers) in terms of 5 types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.

The bar chart compares different kinds of transport used by a person in terms of distances traveled per week in kilometers in the UK in 1990 and 2000.

Overall, the distance gone with transportation vehicles went up from 1990 to 2000. In addition, the noticeable increase had air transportation in the same period.

As for vehicles having a decrease in distance, the number of kilometers by bicycle and motorbike decreased in 2000 compared with 1990. In 1990, the distance traveled per person per week by motorbike was nearly 5 km while that by bicycle was about 3 km. these km for motorbike and bcycle reduced to roughly 2 and 1 km after 10 years, respectively.

When it comes to transports traveled longer distance, bus traveled the longest distance in both 1990 and 2000 with 41 km on average. Following that, rail had nearly 38 km per person per week in 1990 and 2000. Moreover, the distance per person per week by bus and trail rose by 2 km from 1990 to 2000 as the same. The most remarkable change happened for air transport. While it had the least distance with 1 km in 1990, it became to travel 5 km per person per week in 2000.

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The [ 1] bar chart [ 2] illustrates compares five modes of transport in the UK in terms of distances traveled per person per week (in kilometers) in terms of 5 types of transport in the UK between in 1990 and 2000.

The bar chart compares different kinds of transport used by a person in terms of distances traveled per week in kilometers in the UK in 1990 and 2000.

Overall, the total distance gone with transportation vehicles went up, and bus and rail dominated in both years. from 1990 to 2000. In addition, the noticeable increase had air transportation in the same period.

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The distances travelled by bicycle and motorbike were very small, and they dropped approximately from 4 to 2 km for the former, and from 6 to 3 km for the latter.

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As for bus, the most distance was travelled in the both years. The kilometers by bus were 40 in 1990, while that was nearly 45 in 2000.

Regarding rail, rail came second in terms of distance travelled per person in 1990 and 2000. It was almost 35 km for the former and 38 km for the latter.

Another modes of transport had much less distance with under 5 km in a week. The distance by bicycle and motorbike was so close each other by having a decreasing trend in 2000 compared to 1990. Conversely, air transportation had an incease in 2000 by 3 km per person, while it was just 2 in 1990.

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