Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self –employed.

Recently, running own business has become far more prevalent among new generations than working for others. While various positive points contribute to this trend, self-employment still triggers several possible drawbacks.


On the one hand, certain factors contribute to the higher self-employment rate. First, a start-up business allows individuals to feel a sense of freedom. Freelance jobs do not require employees like corporations or manufacturers to stick to a fixed schedule. A flexible timetable allows new generations to meet their requirements and work according to their program, regardless of circumstances. Another cause of this phenomenon is that it seems more manageable for individuals to possess a work-life balance. Self-employed people can determine the amount of time for career and personal life goals by themselves instead of sacrificing family for work or vice versa.


On the other hand, there are also several matters that entrepreneurs need to tackle. First and foremost, a start-up often requires considerable capital at the beginning. It seems exceptionally tricky for most youngsters since they may not have enough monetary accumulation, assuming they do not receive financial support from their acquaintances and must handle everything alone. In addition, not working for a company means freelancers cannot be supported with employee benefits. When not belonging to organizations or manufacturers, workers are not eligible to be illegally entitled to monetary assistance, such as paid maternity leave, sick leave, or even pension. It would be very demanding for some having financial troubles.


In conclusion, self-employment is attractive because it allows people to have freedom and juggle family and career; however, self-employed people could have economic difficulties and be affected by the lack of welfare.

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Recently, running own business (poor English) has become far more prevalent among new generations (wrong usage) than working for others. (You are comparing generations with working for others. The sentence is badly constructed.) While various positive points contribute to this trend, self-employment still triggers (wrong word) several possible drawbacks.


On the one hand, (This transition phrase is not appropriate for this two-part essay type. Only use this in "advantages/disadvantages" or "describe both views" essay types.) certain factors contribute to the higher self-employment rate. (wrong phrase. ) First, a start-up business allows individuals to feel a sense of freedom. Freelance jobs do not require employees like corporations (You compare an employee to a corporation. The sentence is not structured well.) or manufacturers to stick to a fixed schedule. A flexible timetable allows new generations (wrong usage) to meet their requirements and work according to their program, regardless of circumstances. Another cause of this phenomenon (wrong word) is that it seems more manageable for individuals to possess (wrong word) a work-life balance. Self-employed people can determine the amount of time for they devote to their business. career and personal life goals by themselves instead of sacrificing family for work or vice versa. (That is not a sound argument. Business owners often must spend every waking hour to get their business up and running. If they do not, the business falters and fails. )


On the other hand, there are also several matters that entrepreneurs need to tackle. (Not a natural word here) First and foremost, a start-up often requires considerable capital at the beginning. It seems exceptionally tricky for most youngsters (wrong word. Youngster is very casual. It is not appropriate for this essay. In the US, a youngster is a child aged 7 to 12. Most youngsters are still in primary school.) since they may not have enough monetary accumulation, (wrong usage) assuming they do not receive financial support from their acquaintances and must handle everything alone. (This is quite unnatural and awkward.) In addition, not working for a company means freelancers cannot be supported with employee benefits. When not belonging to (wrong usage) organizations or manufacturers, workers are not eligible to be illegally entitled (wrong usage - There is no such thing as an "illegal entitlement.") to monetary assistance, such as paid maternity leave, sick leave, or even a pension. It would be very demanding for some having financial troubles.


In conclusion, self-employment is attractive because it allows people to have freedom and juggle family and career; however, self-employed people could have economic difficulties and be affected by the lack of welfare. (wrong usage)


This essay has a "two-part" question. You must clearly answer the first question in the first body paragraph, and the second in the second body paragraph.

These two questions are not opposite points of view.