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You have planned to study a distance course online from an international university.

Write a letter to the university officer requesting information about the course. Here are some points to consider:

  • Why you are writing the letter
  • Which course is it and when you plan to study
  • Why you want to study this course

Dear Mr.Park,


I’m writing this letter to request further information about the Information and Communication Technology course at ChungA university, which appeals to me recently.


I have already read the announcement posted on the Coursera website, but there are some unclear parts about the content and timeline of the course I do not understand. Therefore, it would be most helpful if you could provide me with more details. Besides, I am also curious about how we study online and how I can contact the teachers. Furthermore, ChungA university is well-known for offering considerable scholarships each year, so I wonder where to find the policy to apply.


This program is a solid step towards my future career because being a software engineer requires a range of knowledge in technology fields. ChungA is a prestigious university for its excellent quality of teaching, so I long to be a part of the course.


I would be most grateful if you could send me a detailed email. Thank you in advance for your attention to my request.

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Dear Mr.Park,

I’m writing this letter to request further clarification regarding information about the Information and Communication Technology course which I am interested in attending. at ChungA university, which appeals to me recently. (Mr. Park works at the university, so you do not need to mention the name of the university. The clause "which appeals to me recently" is very unnatural.)


I have already read the announcement posted on the Coursera website, but there are some unclear parts about the content and timeline of the course that I do not understand. Therefore, it would be most helpful if you could provide me with more details. Besides, I am also curious about how we study online and how I can contact the teachers. Furthermore, ChungA university (Proper names need to be capitalized.) is well-known for offering considerable scholarships each year, so I wonder where I can to find the application form and how policy to apply.

(You did not explain when you plan to study.)

This program is a solid step towards my future career because being a software engineer requires a range of knowledge of Information Technology. in technology fields. ChungA is a prestigious university for its excellent quality of teaching, so I look forward to taking long to be a part of the course.


I would be most grateful if you could send me a detailed email. Thank you in advance for your attention to my request.