Write about the following topic:

Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.


The pandemic in the recent days has changed learning behaviour of most of the students. Some people might think that learning in a class is more interactive and effective compared to online studying. Nevertheless, I am of opinion that distance learning is a new trend of education and it brings more outcomes than we expected.

On the one hand, traditional learning with an offline class would be a key solution for any specific problems from lectures due to the diversity in class attendances. Only if a problem is given by teachers or instructors, would student collect ideas from several individual to form a final solution. The diversity in a class will help each pupils find their missing and fix any mistakes in their knowledge. Moreover, competence is also a vital factor that strongly affect education process of a student. With a large amount of talents in a class, some students do not want to be missing out to new knowledge and they are motivated to find the way to improve themselves. For example, a specific student who decide to learn a new language by their own, could be easily bored and lose their initial spirit. However, a strong aspiration would come due to rivals in a class.

Notwithstanding with the above consideration, distance learning tend to be a very considerable solution for any course in the recent years and technological innovation contributes a strong part of this trend. To be specific, online learning helps students expand their intellectual property by a huge source of numerous topics on the Internet. Student now not only learn from books which is limited at school or experience of lecturers, but they also accumulate knowledge by accessing to worldwide connection and gaining more knowledge such as watching videos, online books with unlimited sources, image or case study. In addition, this new method of learning is the best way to save money and time of students. An abundance of students are living far from school and each day they have to spend a remarkable cost and time also in order to travel from home to school and vice versa. Learning without going to class create more opportunities for variety of students in their education path.

In conclusion, it is feasible that traditional learning is irreplacable and it contributes to most of human success. Therefore, it is the best way to combine both of these learning methods to maximize the learning outcomes.

You did not answer the essay prompt: To what extent do you agree or disagree?

This is your answer: Nevertheless, I am of opinion that distance learning is a new trend of education.

That may be true, but it does not answer if you agree, or disagree and to what extent. You will lose points because you did not answer the question.

danh197On the one hand, traditional learning with an offline class would be a key solution for any specific problems from lectures due to the diversity in class attendances.

I have no idea what you mean. What is an "offline class"? I do not understand "diversity in class attendances." It makes no sense. An attendance is your presence in a theater or other place. You have perfect attendance if you do not miss a single class.

I do not understand much of your writing. You are using words and phrases that you do not understand well. There are grammatical errors too.


On the one hand, traditional learning with an offline class (That is not a good expression.) would be a key solution for any specific problems from lectures (I do not understand this. It is not good English) due to the diversity in class attendances. Only if a problem is given by teachers or instructors, (Are there cases where teachers do not give problems for students to solve?) would student collect ideas from several individual (wrong form) to form a final solution. The diversity in a class will help each pupils (wrong form) find their missing (Missing is an adjective. You need a noun.) and fix any mistakes in their knowledge. (That does not make sense. Knowledge is things we know. Students build knowledge by learning correct information.) Moreover, competence is also a vital factor that strongly affect (wrong form) a student's education. education process of a student. (That is not good English. Students do not own a process.) With a large amount of talents (wrong form. A talent is an ancient coin. It is mentioned in the Bible.) in a class, some students do not want to be missing out to new knowledge and they are motivated to find the way to improve themselves. For example, a specific student who decide (wrong form) to learn a new language by their own,(wrong expression) could be easily bored and lose their initial spirit. (wrong word ) However, a strong aspiration (wrong word) would come due to rivals in a class.

I did not give feedback on the next paragraph. It was difficult to understand because of misused words and grammatical errors.

The essay you wrote is the type of essay called an "advantages/disadvantages essay", but that was not the topic.

You have to take one opinion - which is better: studying with students in a classroom, or studying by yourself online at home. - and present arguments that support your choice. If you do not write the kind of essay as directed by the instructions, and write a different kind of essay, you will not score well.

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