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1st email

I have created two templates for sub-contract. Kindly get rid of the old and replace those new in the cloud.

2nd email

Please note item 4.1 and Appendix 8 for two sub-contracts. Please advise if the version no. needs to amend or not.

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Rita NganI have created two templates for sub-contract. Kindly get rid of the old and replace those new in the cloud.

I have created two templates for subcontracting agreements. Please delete the older versions and use these.

Rita NganPlease note item 4.1 and Appendix 8 for two sub-contracts. Please advise if the version no. needs to amend or not.

I cannot understand this. Are these references for an agreement with your subcontractor?

The second sentence is ungrammatical.


Please tell me if we need to change the version number.

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Just from reading the text, the sentences are confusing. What do you mean by "templates" in your sentence? If you use "template" as defined in the dictionary, I can't see what you tried to come across with "subcontract". You need to rewrite them in another way to make it more scrutable.

Dear AlpheccaStars,

In the 2nd email I remind the receiver to pay attention to item 4.1 and Appendix 8 respectively which are the differences between two sub-contracting agreements. As those IMS documents are managed by this manager, I need to seek advice for the version number which is typed on the bottom of the right-hand side of the document. From now on, we need to let the sub-contractor to go through our terms and conditions from this agreement while sending our request to the sub-contractor for a quotation.

Rita Ngan two sub-contracting agreements.

two subcontracting agreements.

https://www.investopedia.com/terms/s/subcontracting.asp

The words are not hyphenated.

subcontract
subcontractor
subcontracting

Rita NganI need to seek advice for the version number which is typed on the bottom of the right-hand side of the document.

Please note the areas where these two documents have differences: item 4.1 and Appendix 8.

Does the version number printed on these documents need to be updated?

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