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please correct mistakes in Active or Passive Voice in the following passage

Our daily life has being significantly changed by computers. They can be seen all around us, in school, in business, and even in many homes. It seems that there is no field or aspect of life today that has not been affect by this new technology. When we go shopping, do our banking or any other business, or register for courses, the calculations is made by computers. Computers are often involve when we buy a book or order a sweater from a catalog. Children use them now for games and at least are active instead of just watching a TV show.

As this technology develops and progresses,computers will become more and more available to people. This availability is going to make the impact of the computer even more significantly in the next ten years. Our lives and our children's lives will definitely be affected. What we don't know is whether the effect will be good or bad.
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vicky 99please correct mistakes in Active or Passive Voice in the following passage

Our daily life has being been significantly changed by computers. They can be seen all around us, in school, in business, and even in many homes. It seems that there is no field or aspect of life today that has not been affect affected by this new technology. When we go shopping, do our banking or any other business, or register for courses, the calculations is are made by computers. Computers are often involve involved when we buy a book or order a sweater from a catalog. Children use them now for games and at least are active instead of just watching a TV show.

As this technology develops and progresses,computers will become more and more available to people. This availability is going to make the impact of the computer even more significantly significant in the next ten years. Our lives and our children's lives will definitely be affected. What we don't know is whether the effect will be good or bad.
Yoong Liat
vicky 99please correct mistakes in Active or Passive Voice in the following passage

Our daily life has being been significantly changed by computers. They can be seen all around us, in school, in business, and even in many homes. It seems that there is no field or aspect of life today that has not been affect affected by this new technology. When we go shopping, do our banking or any other business, or register for courses, the calculations is are made by computers. Computers are often involve involved when we buy a book or order a sweater from a catalog. Children use them now for games and at least are active instead of just watching a TV show.

As this technology develops and progresses,computers will become more and more available to people. This availability is going to make the impact of the computer even more significantly significant in the next ten years. Our lives and our children's lives will definitely be affected. What we don't know is whether the effect will be good or bad.

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Yoong Liat
vicky 99please correct mistakes in Active or Passive Voice in the following passage

Our daily life has being been significantly changed by computers. They can be seen all around us, in school, in business, and even in many homes. It seems that there is no field or aspect of life today that has not been affect affected by this new technology. When we go shopping, do our banking or any other business, or register for courses, the calculations is are made by computers. Computers are often involve involved when we buy a book or order a sweater from a catalog. Children use them now for games and at least are active instead of just watching a TV show.

As this technology develops and progresses,computers will become more and more available to people. This availability is going to make the impact of the computer even more significantly significant in the next ten years. Our lives and our children's lives will definitely be affected. What we don't know is whether the effect will be good or bad.

thank you!!!
Yoong Liat
vicky 99please correct mistakes in Active or Passive Voice in the following passage

Our daily life has being been significantly changed by computers. They can be seen all around us, in school, in business, and even in many homes. It seems that there is no field or aspect of life today that has not been affect affected by this new technology. When we go shopping, do our banking or any other business, or register for courses, the calculations is are made by computers. Computers are often involve involved when we buy a book or order a sweater from a catalog. Children use them now for games and at least are active instead of just watching a TV show.

As this technology develops and progresses,computers will become more and more available to people. This availability is going to make the impact of the computer even more significantly significant in the next ten years. Our lives and our children's lives will definitely be affected. What we don't know is whether the effect will be good or bad.

thank you!!!
Hi Moderator

What has happened to the system? Why one post by Vicky 99 becomes three? I also posted earlier and there were three posts shown. Emotion: surprise
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Hi Moderator

What has happened to the system? Why one post by Vicky 99 becomes three? I also posted earlier and there were three posts shown.
I don't knowEmotion: zip it ,but I really appreciate your kindness to help me [Y]