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Dear Sir

On the recommendation of Prof. xxxxx, I am writing to you in order to find a suitable doctoral position in your esteemed research group.

After my graduation I am working as MPhil Research xxx I had designed a project on the sensing of xxx using biomarker on nanomaterials especially yyyy from this lab I obtained skills in synthesis and characterization of xxx and there wide range application in bioimaging and sensing thus focused my interest on nanomaterials and their application.

In May 2017 I got the master’s degree in Pure and Applied Chemistry. During my last academic year, I had a chance to do the project in xxxx. There I gained profound knowledge in synthesis and characterization of biomass-derived chemicals. My thesis is related to the Synthesis of dialkoxy methyl furan under heterogeneous catalysis.

As well as my good understanding of academic principles, I am a very motivated, hardworking and effective individual. Throughout my career, I obtained a good communication and organizational skills. I was also lucky enough to have a discussion with you. Having carefully observed your ongoing research I believe that getting an opportunity to work under your able guidance will be a rewarding experience for my research career I am confident that my training, academic background & research experience would make me a worthwhile contribution to your research program


Thank you very much for your time consideration. My resume is enclosed. I look forward to hearing from you.


Yours faithfully,

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After my graduation I am working as MPhil Research xxx I had designed a project on the sensing of xxx using biomarker on nanomaterials especially yyyy from this lab I obtained skills in synthesis and characterization of xxx and there wide range application in bioimaging and sensing thus focused my interest on nanomaterials and their application.

That is one very very long sentence, and the verb tenses are all mixed up. It should be 2-4 sentences with consistent tenses. Also, what is MPhil Research?

In May 2017 I got the master’s degree in Pure and Applied Chemistry. During my last academic year, I had a chance to do the project in xxxx. There I gained profound knowledge in synthesis and characterization of biomass-derived chemicals. My thesis is related to the Synthesis of dialkoxy methyl furan under heterogeneous catalysis.

You paragraphs are not in a logical order. "After my graduation" should logically come after "In May 2017"

Asfor the last paragraph, do not use symbols like "&" in formal writing. And make sure you have punctuated the sentences correctly.

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Dear Sir


On the recommendation of xxxx, I am writing to you in order to find a suitable doctoral position in your esteemed research group.

I am currently an MPhil Research scholar at Kerala University Karyavattom campus in the Department of Chemistry, working under the advisement of Professor xxx. I had designed a project on the sensing of prediabetes biomarkers on nanomaterials especially yyy. From this lab, I obtained skills in synthesis and characterization of carbon dots and their wide range application in bioimaging and sensing which has focused my interest on nanomaterial and their application. The laboratory resources at xxx would enable to expand my further research and seek publication.

In May 2017 I got the master’s degree in Pure and Applied Chemistry. During my last academic year, I had a chance to do the project in xxx. There I gained profound knowledge in synthesis and characterization of biomass-derived chemicals. My thesis is related to the Synthesis of dialkoxy methyl furan under heterogeneous catalysis. My college major has included a variety of theoretical courses as well as a great deal of laboratory experience. I am a hard worker, focused, and capable of producing high-quality and thorough work under time constraints.

Throughout my career, I obtained a good communication and organizational skills. I was also fortunate enough to have a discussion with you. Having carefully observed your ongoing research I believe that getting an opportunity to work under your able guidance will be a rewarding experience for my research career. I am confident that my training, academic background and research experience would make me a worthwhile contribution to your research program.

Thank you very much for your time consideration. My resume is enclosed. I look forward to hearing from you.


Yours faithfully,

JAYAKRISHNA J

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On the recommendation of xxxx, I am writing to you in order to inquire if you might have an opening for a doctoral candidate with my interests and qualifications. find a suitable doctoral position in your esteemed research group.

I am currently an MPhil a postgraduate research scholar at Kerala University Karyavattom campus in the Department of Chemistry, working under the advisement of Professor xxx. I had designed have been contributing to a project on the sensing of prediabetes prediabetic biomarkers on nanomaterials especially yyy. From this In his lab, I obtained skills in the synthesis and characterization of carbon dots and their wide range of applications in bioimaging and sensing. This which has focused my interest on nanomaterials and their application. The laboratory resources at xxx would enable me to expand my further research publish results. and seek publication.

In May 2017, I got the obtained my master’s degree in Pure and Applied Chemistry. During my last academic year, I had a chance to do a the project in xxx. There I gained comprehensive profound knowledge in synthesis and characterization of biomass-derived chemicals. My thesis is related to the synthesis of dialkoxy methyl furan under heterogeneous catalysis. My courses college major has included a variety of theoretical courses as well as a great deal of laboratory experience. I am a hard worker, focused, and capable of producing high-quality and thorough work under time constraints.

Throughout my career, I obtained a good communication and organizational skills. I was also fortunate enough to have a discussion with you. Having carefully observed your ongoing research I believe that getting an opportunity to work under your able guidance will be a rewarding experience for my research career. I am confident that my training, academic background and research experience would make me a worthwhile contribution to your research program.

Thank you very much for your time consideration. My resume is enclosed. I look forward to hearing from you.


Yours faithfully,

THANK YOU, SIR

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