I love eating foods

I love eating foods. At my home, as long as there are some foods which I think it tastes well, I will eat all them up if my mother does not stop me in time. Although I remember that my parents took me to the hospital at midnight because I ate too much, I can’t wait for a good food for tomorrow.

The Mcdonald’s, KFC and pizza are my favourite foods, I think they are delicious, but my parents told me that they are junk foods. I know my parents don’t want me to become a fat girl, but I love eating the foods.

Although there are a lot of foods I like, there are foods I hate to eat, they are green peppers and some other vegetables, I think they are very bitter, but my parents told me they are healthy food, they want me eat more.

I love eating foods, but I hate green peppers.
Dear teachers,

Hi,my name is Shirley. I’m in my fourth year of primary school. I like leaning English. But I can’t write English very well. So, I ask you for help. Thank you very much!
Dear teachers, could you kindly help her take a look of the essay? Since it's her first essay (though probably could not be called an essay yet), please do help!

Thank you very much!

Her father
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Thank you teachers! (-:
"you love eating foods"

I love drinking water.
Hi, Shirley! I'm glad you like learning English so much. You have written a very nice essay -- keep up the good work! Here are a few comments for you:

I love eating foods.=
You can just say 'I love eating', and people will understand you mean food.

As long as there are some foods which I think it tastes well good=
Here it is better to use an adjective: which I think taste good. Or, you could just say 'which I like'!

Although I remember that my parents once took me to the hospital at midnight=
If you are talking about one visit special time, it's better to add 'once'

I can’t wait for a good food for tomorrow.=
'I still can't wait for tomorrow and more good food' is a little clearer,

The McDonald’s, KFC and pizza are my favourite foods=
We usually talk about just 'McDonald's', without 'the'.

I love eating these foods=
It's better to use 'these', not 'the', to show you are still talking about McDonald's, KFC and pizza.

Although there are a lot of foods I like, there are foods I hate to eat, . These are green peppers and some other vegetables, . I think they are very bitter, but my parents told me they are healthy food, and they want me eat more.=
This is a long sentence. It would be better to break it into a few shorter ones.

I love eating foods, but I hate green peppers.=
Like at the beginning, you don't need to say 'foods' after 'eating'

I hope these ideas help you, and wish you luck with your schoolwork!
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Dear Sagra,
Thank you for your kind help! I will rewrite my Essay according to your corrections. Hope I can improve my English quickly with your help! Thanks again!
you did a good job