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Hi,

Please help correct my sentence to my boss, thanks

"The report has been created, please have a look, and advise me if there is any place that needs further improvement."

Regards/Zoe
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Hi Zoe,

Why don't you register? Then your posts will appear right away!

There are a number of ways you can say this. The only thing you MUST change is to put a period where you have your first comma.

The report has been created. - Don't you want to say "I have created the report"? Either way is okay, but if you did it, say you did it!

Please have a look - this is okay, but a bit informal. You can say "Please review" instead.

and let me know if there are any places [or if there is anything] that need improvement.

So, here are two versions, either of which should be fine:

I've created the report. Please review it and let me know if there is anything that needs improvement.

The report has been created. Please review it and let me know if there are any places that need changes.
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Hi Barbara,

Thank you for your correction. BTW, how can register to become the member of this forums? (I'm so silly Emotion: stick out tongue ) Please advise

Regards/Zoe
Hi Zoe,

In the upper right corner of your screen, it should say "Join."

http://www.EnglishForward.com/user/CreateUser.aspx?ReturnUrl=/logout.aspx
Grammar GeekHi Zoe,

In the upper right corner of your screen, it should say "Join."

http://www.EnglishForward.com/user/CreateUser.aspx?ReturnUrl=/logout.aspx

Hi Barbara,

I already join the forums, but I cannot see my name appears ?

Zoe
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hy i am very student but my english is not good.I want to improve my english.bcz its international language.I become a great buisness man in world so i can improve my english
Dear [Name?]

Hi: I have created the reports and please have a look at it. If there is having any problems or changes, please do contact me.

Regards,

Zoe

After reading from your writing, I can see that you are really poor in English. xD

As far as I can say that I am not good in English, either. Still needs to be improve.
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