question : this is a letter Which I have just written. This letter mentions my contributions to mu school and community
I am privileged to write in support of my dear employee and colleague, Nguyen Minh Duong. I have known Duong for the past five years, having served as both his employer and his colleague. During this time I have witnessed his tremendous growth and development. This development comes not only in the area of leadership but also in maturity and character as well. I believe Duong would be an excellent addition to your master of education course.

First, I see Duong as a teacher who takes great responsibility in doing his work, and one who has the ability to build professional organizations and provide good career orientation for students. I have found these qualities in Duong exemplified by his organizing English club extracurricular activities where he serves as the chairman. In particular, an extra-curricular program called 12-hour Challenge, where he designed a wide variety of outdoor activities to promote students’ self-reliance and self-esteem, has been an extra-curricular model for schools throughout the whole province, and several students has become leaders, presenter in non – government organizations after they leave my school. Moreover, taking responsibility of the chairman of study abroad club – that is a club where the number of gifted students has a good orientation in studying abroad, Duong always shows that he is interested in utilizing new methods of career orientation for his students. Especially, from 2015 to 2018, there were 08 students in the club who were instructed by Mr. Duong received scholarships from the US and Australian governments. Despite this, in recent years, the rate of unemployment among our school’s students after graduating from university has been increasing because the initial career orientation is not effective. We trust that, having learned new methods related to vocational education through this masters course, Mr. Duong will have the tools he needs to solve this problem.

Throughout his tenure, Mr. Duong has been known as a leader in the Ho Chi Minh Communist Youth Union at the school. I know him as a youth union secretary who helped hundreds of ethnic students with motivation to go to school, with a clear career orientation. A lot of students he helped are now working as managers, tour guides or staff at hotel restaurants in Lao Cai. Furthermore, Mr. Duong has impressed me with his skills at managing his students. In fact, Lao Cai High School for Gifted Students is known for its learning environment where students have a high sense of discipline. This has had a significant contribution from Mr. Duong as the head of the student management board. I also appreciate Mr. Duong’s creativity and enthusiasm shown through the radio program called La Casette, which he founded. This radio program serves as a forum to answer all students’ questions about learning, about the school or about students’ future career objectives through daily broadcast news. This radio program has provided hundreds of students studying at the school with useful information about future learning and careers.

Given the excellent education your university provides, I am confident that Duong will be able to prepare himself well for future endeavors. I am always looking forward to fostering and developing a potential candidate like Mr. Duong to become an educational leader at my school in the future. He has my highest recommendation, and I am happy to furnish more details if you would like additional information

I think this is the third time you have posted a recommendation letter for Duong. Weren't you satisfied with our previous feedback?

https://www.englishforums.com/English/ThisRecommendLetterWroteCorect-GrammarVocabularyAnything-Cha/bxrxgl/post.htm

this letter I have rewritten some sentences as well as added some new ideas
Students: Are you brave enough to let our tutors analyse your pronunciation?

Did you use any of our feedback?

of course, yes sir. it is really useful.

Then be considerate of us and only ask us to check the parts that are new.

I have read your recommendation letter three times already!

In the future, post your final final draft rather than something that is still in the composition process.

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I am sorry for that! I forgot highlighting the new part. Anyway, thank you very much for your help, I completed all my writings! Thanks your fantastic English forum. I really appreciate the forum, and express my sincere thanks to you and your co-workers.