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Our daily life has being significantly changed by computers. They can be seen all around us, in school, in business, and even in many homes. It seems that there is no field or aspect of life today that has not been affect by this new technology. When we go shopping, do our banking or any other business, or register for courses, the calculations is made by computers. Computers are often involve when we buy a book or order a sweater from a catalog. Children use them now for games and at least active instead of just watching a TV show.

As this technology develops and progresses. computers will become more and more available to people. This availability is going make the impact of the computer even more significantly in the net ten years. Our lives and our children's lives will definitely be affected. What we don't know is whether the effect will be good or bad.
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I have underlined some problem areas, Vicky:

Our daily life has being significantly changed by computers. They can be seen all around us, in school, in business, and even in many homes. It seems that there is no field or aspect of life today that has not been affect by this new technology. When we go shopping, do our banking or any other business, or register for courses, the calculations is made by computers. Computers are often involve when we buy a book or order a sweater from a catalog. Children use them now for games and at least active instead of just watching a TV show.

As this technology develops and progresses. computers will become more and more available to people. This availability is going make the impact of the computer even more significantly in the net ten years. Our lives and our children's lives will definitely be affected. What we don't know is whether the effect will be good or bad.

I must say that this sounds like it was written 20 or 25 years ago; computers are now in every home, etc.
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please correct mistakes in Active or Passive Voice in the following passage

Our daily life has being significantly changed by computers. They can be seen all around us, in school, in business, and even in many homes. It seems that there is no field or aspect of life today that has not been affect by this new technology. When we go shopping, do our banking or any other business, or register for courses, the calculations is made by computers. Computers are often involve when we buy a book or order a sweater from a catalog. Children use them now for games and at least are active instead of just watching a TV show.

As this technology develops and progresses,computers will become more and more available to people. This availability is going to make the impact of the computer even more significantly in the next ten years. Our lives and our children's lives will definitely be affected. What we don't know is whether the effect will be good or bad.