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Dear Sir,

I would like to ask in your good office to allow me to have a live-out status. I am now serving more than 2 years to our successful company. With the work and effort I have shown to our company, I hope you will grant my humble request especially I also belong to Grade-7. I will be very grateful if you grant my request. I am hoping for your kind and willful approval regarding this request.

Thank you very much for your kind and consideration.

Sincerely Yours,

Jastone
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Hi,

This style of writng would not be good in Canada, but it's probably great for where you live. So, you really shouldn't change much. Here are a few suggestions.

Dear Sir,

I would like to ask in your good office to allow me to have a live-out status. I have now served more than 2 years in our successful company. With the work and effort I have shown to our company, I hope you will grant my humble request, especially because I also belong to Grade 7. I will be very grateful if you grant my request. I am hoping for your kind and willful approval regarding this request.

Thank you very much for your kind and consideration.

Sincerely Yours,

Clive
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thanks clive for your help

Request to please for your kind consideration & positive reply.