Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. Today, movies are popular all over the world. Some of reasons are: the movies are kind of entertainment for everyone; anyone can see them at anytime and anywhere; variety of movies suit for many kinds of people. All of them will be explained below. The first, movies help people entertain whenever they need. After a very hard and tired working day, everyone wants to relax to reduce stress, tired feelings, to prepare the comfort for working next day. Besides sports, shopping, chatting ... people usually choose the movies to entertain. They can see movies which they like. They can see movies either with their family, friends or alone. When they see with others, they can give their opinions about the movies together. And, of course, they feel nervous when they see a horrible film, they feel upset when they see an action film, they can even cry when they see a too romantic film. The second, with development of science and technology, anyone can see movies at anytime and anywhere. Some of people, who have time and money, can see movies in the cinemas with the newest ones. Some of others, who haven't much time, can see them on television when they are free. Especially, the people, who are sitting next to a computer, can see a movie on internet. The third, variety of movies are suitable for many kinds of ages. People usually see movies which are suitable for their age, for example, the feeling film for adults, the romantic film for people who are falling in love, the action film for youths, the comedy film for olders, the cartoon film for children ... They can also see the movie in one volume, or in multi-volume. Nowadays, the movies are more and more various. In conclusion, movies are an essential type of entertainment of people. The more modern society is, the more various and popular movies are. We can see any kinds of movies at anytime and anywhere when we want.
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Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Today, movies are popular all over the world. Some of reasons are: the movies are kind of entertainment for everyone; anyone can see them at anytime and anywhere; variety of movies suit for many kinds of people. All of them will be explained below.

The first, movies help people entertain whenever they need. After a very hard and tired working day, everyone wants to relax to reduce stress, tired feelings, to prepare the comfort for working next day. Besides sports, shopping, chatting ... people usually choose the movies to entertain. They can see movies which they like. They can see movies either with their family, friends or alone. When they see with others, they can give their opinions about the movies together. And, of course, they feel nervous when they see a horrible film, they feel upset when they see an action film, they can even cry when they see a too romantic film.

The second, with development of science and technology, anyone can see movies at anytime and anywhere. Some of people, who have time and money, can see movies in the cinemas with the newest ones. Some of others, who haven't much time, can see them on television when they are free. Especially, the people, who are sitting next to a computer, can see a movie on internet.

The third, variety of movies are suitable for many kinds of ages. People usually see movies which are suitable for their age, for example, the feeling film for adults, the romantic film for people who are falling in love, the action film for youths, the comedy film for olders, the cartoon film for children ... They can also see the movie in one volume, or in multi-volume. Nowadays, the movies are more and more various.

In conclusion, movies are an essential type of entertainment of people. The more modern society is, the more various and popular movies are. We can see any kinds of movies at anytime and anywhere when we want.
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Today, movies are popular all over the world. Some of the reasons are: movies can be an entertainment for everyone; anyone can see them anytime and anywhere; genres of movie suit for all kinds of people. All of them will be explained below. First, it is entertainment or sometimes can be depression reliever. Also, it will help someone to release his/her stress to a whole day tiring work. People might choose to see movies rather than do some exhausting things like, chatting, playing games or go for shopping. They can see movies which they like. They can see movies either with their family, friends or alone. When they are with others, they can give their opinions about the movies together. And, of course, they feel nervous when they see a horrible film, they feel upset when they see an action film, they can even cry when they see a too romantic film. ------to be continued..i am finding for better verbs to use and adjectives to make it more interesting