britsh researchers said that a number of people who living with cancer have witnessed a remarkable improvement in their health and life style after being treated with bacteria that is typically found in soil ...

researchers stated that this bacteria has properities help to overcome depression by stimulating the chemical substance of serotonin , that the reduction of this substance lead man to melancholy .

so the anti dipression drugs operate by stimulating the chemicals in the brain...
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why you didnt correct my essay
lolokalbritsh researchers said that a number of people who living with cancer have witnessed a remarkable improvement in their health and life style after being treated with bacteria that is typically found in soil ...

researchers stated that this bacteria has properities help to overcome depression by stimulating the chemical substance of serotonin , that the reduction of this substance lead man to melancholy .

so the anti dipression drugs operate by stimulating the chemicals in the brain...

Hi lolokal,

Please use proper capitalization and punctuation, and check your spelling. Sentences start with a capital letter and end with a period/full stop, not an ellipsis. (One . not three ...) Also, commas go immediately after the word, so don't leave a space.

Lifestyle is one word.

You should name the bacteria.

You should explain the connectiong between "health" and "depression." When I read the first sentence, I thought you were talking about a cure for cancer, or at least improving the cancer symptoms.

Anti-depression.

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thank you very much you really helpfull.

so could you please correct this essay ???

Athletic woman brings intellegent children :

Women who exercise running sport bring intelligent and healthy children, recent german study said.

This study stated that the bicycles riding sport is a recommended sport exercise during the last months of pregnancy due to the fact that it promotes the pregnant and fetus vitality and activity.

Running sport ,cycling and swimming lead to brain movement`s purity and provide the fetus with blood and food in a very easy way that helps the child to have pure brain, the study concluded.
Hi lolokal,

You have some errors.

We say "exercise" not "sport exercise."

Please tell me what these phrases mean:

exercise running sport -- do you mean simply "running"?

the bicycles riding sport -- do mean "bike riding"?

it promotes the pregnant -- I just don't know what you mean

brain movement`s purity -- I don't know what you mean

pure brain -- I don't know what you mean

(It is almost impossible for me to believe that they are recommending that women in that last months of pregnancy ride bicyles. The change in balance increases the risk of falls, and a fall could be very dangerous for the baby. Can you cite this study?)

Athletic Women brings Have Intellegent Children:

Women who exercise running sport ?? excercise are more likely to ?? bring have intelligent and healthy children, a recent German study said.

This study stated that the bicycles riding sport ?? bicycle riding is a recommended sport exercise during the last months of pregnancy due to the fact that because it promotes the pregnant and fetus vitality and activity.

Running sport ,cycling and swimming lead to brain movement`s purity and provide the fetus with blood and food in a very easy way that helps the child to have pure brain, the study concluded.

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Athletic Women Have Intelligent Children :

Women who exercise are more likely to have intelligent and healthy children, a recent German study said.

This study stated that bicycle riding is a recommended exercise during the last months of pregnancy because it promotes the pregnant`s and fetus`s vitality and activity.

running sport, cycling and swimming lead to the purity of the brain and provide the fetus with blood and food in a very easy way that helps the child to have fresh brain, the study concluded.

may we can use bicycle with four wheels !!!!!!!!!!!!!

purity of the brain i mean in arabic : نقاوة حركة الدماغ

fresh brain دماغا نقيا

i dont know if it is right.
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Lolokal, I'm sorry,but "purity of the brain" and "fresh brain" still don't hae any meaning to me, and you need to try to say this another way too: the pregnant`s and fetus`s vitality and activity
so can we say healthy brain ? and how we can say : it promotes the pregnant`s vitality and promotes the fetus vitality ?
It would help me to help you if you tried to say it in another way.

It leads to a healthier pregnancy for the mother and increased blood flow for the baby... something like that.

As it is, I don't know how to tell you to rewrite it, because I don't know what you're trying to say.

Perhaps you want to change the part about riding a bicylce to riding a stationary bicycle. That's a low-impact activity that doesn't require balance. No one will believe that any doctor recommending riding around town at high speeds while pregnant!
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