My English is very poor.Thank you for your help.

In recent years, one of the serious problems of Hong Kong is that too many mainland women come to to have babies. Some people think that mainland pregnant women should not be allowed to give birth to their babies in because it would cause a lot of social problems here.

First of all, some mainland pregnant women come to to be born babies, but they do not pay the bills. It spends much money of local residents. Besides, they take up too much obstetric service, such as rooms. It makes local pregnant women cannot find a place to give birth and be completely served. Moreover, it will increase the population of . It goes without saying that is very small, but the population is extremely high. If the government does not practice some policies to prevent that, it would cause a lot of social problems, such as housing, unemployment and using all public facilities. Thus, most people oppose it and hope that the government practice effective policies to enable to decrease non-local women to come to have babies.

Nevertheless, however, these measures also cause some issues, such as discrimination, violating Basic Law. Furthermore, some private hospitals exactly face the financial problems of lack of income. Non-local women come to to have babies, revenue of private hospitals would be increased. Finally, one of the serious problems of Hong Kong is that lacks young labours. It can relieve the aging problem.

In my opinion, I agree practicing some measure to prevent mainland women from coming to Hong Kong to give birth, because too many mainland women come to to have babies, but they do not pay the bills. It wastes too many facilities of . In addition, population is very high. If these conditions still constantly happen, I cannot fancy what is in future.
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In recent years, one of the serious problems of Hong Kong is that too many mainland women come to Hong Kong to have babies. Some people think that mainland pregnant women should not be allowed to give birth to their babies in Hong Kong because it could cause a lot of social problems here.

First of all, some mainland pregnant women come to Hong Kong to give birth, but they do not pay the bills. It spends much money of local residents. Besides, they take up too many obstetric services, such as rooms. It means that local pregnant women cannot find a place to give birth and be completely served. Moreover, it will increase the population of Hong Kong. It goes without saying that Hong Kong is very small, but the population is extremely high. If the government does not practice some policies to prevent it, it could cause a lot of social problems, such as housing shortages, unemployment and using all public facilities. Thus, most people oppose it and hope that the government practice effective policies to enable to decrease non-local women to come Hong Kong to have babies.

Nevertheless, however, these measures also cause some issues, such as discrimination, violating Basic Law. Furthermore, some private hospitals exactly face the financial problems of lack of income. If Non-local women come to Hong Kong to have babies, the revenue of private hospitals would be increased. Finally, one of the serious problems of Hong Kong is that Hong Kong lacks young labours. It can relieve the aging problem.

In my opinion, I agree practicing some measure to prevent mainland women from coming to Hong Kong to give birth, because too many mainland women come to Hong Kong to have babies, but they do not pay the bills. It wastes too many facilities of Hong Kong. In addition, the Hong Kong population is very high. If these conditions still constantly happen, I cannot fancy what Hong Kong is in future.


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In recent years, one of the serious problems of Hong Kong is that too many mainland women come to Hong Kong to have babies. Some people think that mainland pregnant women should not be allowed to give birth to their babies in Hong Kong because it could cause a lot of social problems here.

First of all, some mainland pregnant women come to Hong Kong to give birth, but they do not pay the bills. It costs much money of local residents. Besides, they take up too many obstetric services, such as rooms. It means that local pregnant women cannot find a place to give birth and be completely treated. Moreover, it will increase the population of Hong Kong. It goes without saying that Hong Kong is very small, but the population is extremely high. If the government does not practice some policies to prevent it, it could cause a lot of social problems, such as housing shortages, unemployment and public facilities shortages. Thus, most people oppose it and hope that the government practices effective policies to decrease non-local women coming Hong Kong to have babies.

Nevertheless, however, these measures also causes some issues, such as discrimination, violating law of Hong Kong. Furthermore, some private hospitals completely face the lack of income. If Non-local women come to Hong Kong to have babies, the revenue of private hospitals would be increased. Finally, one of the serious problems of Hong Kong is that Hong Kong lacks young labour. It could relieve the aging of the population of Hong Kong.

In my opinion, I agree to practice some measure to prevent mainland women from coming to Hong Kong to give birth, because too many mainland women come to Hong Kong to have babies, but they do not pay the bills. It costs too many wealth of Hong Kong. In addition, the Hong Kong population is very high. If these matters still constantly happen, I cannot imagine what Hong Kong were in future.