My English is very poor. I hope someone can help me, please. Thank you for your help.

Many people think that cosmetic surgery does only harms to people. However, this saying is not always true. To a certain extent, we have a right to settle many our own affairs.
First of all, some people think that doing cosmetic surgery, which is violating the nature. For instance, your baby must not to change his face even you have changed your face very handsome. Moreover, it might have serious potential after-effects. It is a chance that the change is not you expect, after cosmetic surgery, even change worse. Furthermore, to a certain extent, cosmetic surgery is very expensive and you should rest a long time after finish cosmetic surgery, so it might waste you a lot of money and times. In addition, most advertisements are not always true and even boast. Probably, some people are cheated easily by these not true advertisements and that there is no guarantee in the law.
However, cutting hair, drying hair, eye surgery, using cosmetics and gel, abortion, contraception also is violating the nature. Originally, many people oppose above activities, but now, most people gradually accept these even they always do these. Besides, every people have a right to choose their choice. Let us see from another angle, doing cosmetic surgery, which may be positive action because they have a requirement of them, they try to improve themselves. In addition, after doing cosmetic surgery, probably some people have a discrimination to see you. You should have enormous courage before making this decision, which proves that you are brave.
From the nature point of view, I do not agree doing cosmetic surgery and it has serious risks. On the other hand, I even admire them because they might have much courage to do it and admit it. Generally speaking, I dare not do it and I do not have courage do it even if someone sponsors me to do this.
Many people think that cosmetic surgery does only harms to people. However, this saying is not always true. To a certain extent, we have a right to settle many our own affairs.
First of all, some people think that having cosmetic surgery, which is violates the nature. For instance, your baby must not to change his face even you have changed your face very handsome [I'm not entirely clear what you mean here? Perhaps "Your baby will not be able to change his face, no matter how handsome you have made your own face." If this is what you meant, then 'violates' is not the right word in the sentence before]. Moreover, it might have serious potential after-effects. There is a chance that the change after cosmetic surgery may not be what you expect, or even a change for the worse. Furthermore, to a certain extent [in some cases?], cosmetic surgery is very expensive and you need to rest a long time after finish cosmetic surgery, so it might waste you a lot of your money and times. In addition, most advertisements are not always true and even exaggerate. It is possible that some people are fooled easily by these misleading advertisements, and that there is no guarantee in the law [or there is no legal redress].
On the other hand, cutting or dying one's hair, having corrective eye surgery, using cosmetics and gel [styling products?], abortion, and contraception are also violations of nature [again, I don't think violation is the right word here]. Originally, many people opposed the above activities, but now, most people have gradually come to accept these as everyday procedures. Besides, everyone has a right to choose for themselves [or, to make their own choices]. Let us look at this from another angle: having/undergoing cosmetic surgery might be viewed as the positive action of people trying to improve themselves. In addition, after doing cosmetic surgery, probably some people have a discrimination to see you . You will need enormous courage before making this decision, which proves that you are brave.
I do not agree with having cosmetic surgery from a nature point of view [or, because I feel nature should not be meddled with?], and also because it has serious risks. On the other hand, I even do admire people who have surgery because they probably have a great deal of courage to do it and to admit to it. Personally speaking, I dare not do it, and would not have courage do it even if someone were to sponsors me to have it done.
Many people think that cosmetic surgery does only harms to people. However, this saying is not always true. To a certain extent, we have a right to settle many our own affairs.
First of all, some people think that having cosmetic surgery, which is violates the nature. For instance, your baby must not to change his face even you have changed your face very handsome [I'm not entirely clear what you mean here? Perhaps "Your baby will not be able to change his face, no matter how handsome you have made your own face." If this is what you meant, then 'violates' is not the right word in the sentence before]. Moreover, it might have serious potential after-effects. There is a chance that the change after cosmetic surgery may not be what you expect, or even a change for the worse. Furthermore, to a certain extent [in some cases?], cosmetic surgery is very expensive and you need to rest a long time after finish cosmetic surgery, so it might waste you a lot of your money and times. In addition, most advertisements are not always true and even exaggerate. It is possible that some people are fooled easily by these misleading advertisements, and that there is no guarantee in the law [or there is no legal redress].
On the other hand, cutting or dying one's hair, having corrective eye surgery, using cosmetics and gel [styling products?], abortion, and contraception are also violations of nature [again, I don't think violation is the right word here]. Originally, many people opposed the above activities, but now, most people have gradually come to accept these as everyday procedures. Besides, everyone has a right to choose for themselves [or, to make their own choices]. Let us look at this from another angle: having/undergoing cosmetic surgery might be viewed as the positive action of people trying to improve themselves. In addition, after doing cosmetic surgery, probably some people have a discrimination to see you . You will need enormous courage before making this decision, which proves that you are brave.
I do not agree with having cosmetic surgery from a nature point of view [or, because I feel nature should not be meddled with?], and also because it has serious risks. On the other hand, I even do admire people who have surgery because they probably have a great deal of courage to do it and to admit to it. Personally speaking, I dare not do it, and would not have courage do it even if someone were to sponsors me to have it done.
thank you very much. You help me a lot.I am very grateful for you.