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I have received your letter dated ***** . Really it was nice to read it, because you told you got 75% marks in your ssc exam. I am giving you my hearty congratulation for the same.

I know you are wandering about your admission procedures for XI std by now. Please don't get confused with admission procedure, just ring me up immediately if you have any doubt regarding admission procedures, I will help you. I also think, you are also wandering about in which college should you apply for the admission. That is very simple, only fill the application for the colleges which had got `A' grade by NAAC committe, as you have enough percentage to get admission in such colleges.

I wish you get admission in a esteemed college and you keep on your level same in the higher studies also.
Please convey my warm regards to your parents and little sister Nicheh. Reply me immediately as soon as you get admission in a college.

Please correct my sentences.
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I have received your July 31st letter. It was really nice to read it, because you said you got a 75% mark on your SSC exam. My hearty congratulations!

I know you are wondering about the admission procedures for XI Std by now. Just ring me up if you have any doubt regarding admission procedures, and I will help you. I also think you are wondering about which college you should apply to. That is very simple: just fill the application out for the colleges which got an `A' grade from the NAAC committee, as you have a high enough percentage to get admission into such colleges.
I hope you are admitted to an esteemed college and are able to maintain your same level in higher studies also.

Please convey my warm regards to your parents and little sister, Nicheh. Let me know as soon as you are admitted to a college.
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I have received your July 31st letter. It was really nice to read it, because you said you got a 75% mark on your SSC exam. My hearty congratulations!

I tend to use "at your `****' exam", and it sounds very natural to me as many times I heard the phrase `at MET exam', `at GIT exam'.

Please help me with this.
Please convey my warm regards to your parents and little sister, Nicheh. Let me know as soon as you are admitted to a college.
I too tend to write, "Reply me immediately as soon as ...............", is this sentence incorrect?

'On' an exam; I do not like 'in' or 'at', though 'in' is at least possible. Who have you heard 'at' from, and in what context?

Reply to one-- the 'to' is required. Immediately is not grammatically wrong, it is just redundant here, and somewhat aggressive.