please correct the sentence below :

Based on the below information and attached email, could you please provide the official statement letter regarding the delay of the goods (PO No. 4508283092 & 4508202012).

Because this items is very important and the indicated date below customer's expectation.

Your prompt response will be highly appreciated.

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