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Hi 
I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not.
If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them.
Thank you very much.
1.I think that success originate from elaborate plans rather than brave ventures.
2.People try to alter the political climate, forcing the government to make a concession whose 
negotiations benefit them.
3. Only through a whole series of detailed plans did intellectuals attain their lifelong dream of a 
mature democratic nation established.
4.Businessmen try to predict what their rivals or competitors are going to do and think of what 
his company can revise to compete against them.
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Adonis
Hi 
I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not.
If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them.
Thank you very much.
1.I think that success originates from elaborate plans rather than from brave ventures.
2.People try to alter the political climate, forcing the government to make a concession whose 
negotiations benefit them.I don't understand the intent of this sentence.
3. Only through a whole series of detailed plans did intellectuals attain their lifelong dream of a 
mature democratic nation ( is this word necessary? established).
4.Businessmen try to predict what their rivals or competitors are going to do and then think of what 
his(their, not his) companies can revise to compete against them.
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Please use a larger font size. I can't read this as it is, and it's quite possible you aren't getting any responses because others can't read it either! Emotion: smile
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