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1) I have been waiting for your reply three months but still no answer

2) Please do not keep slience .........

3) The cargo had been released. Please revise the inspection to (for) us ASAP.

4) Attached the "pending" inspection report for PO 12345 & 23456 which had been released. Please revise the report to "passed" for us ASAP.

5) We cannot accept this charge for the new cartons box replacement. All the purchase order had required for 1% packaging material which was included instruction sheet, gift box, carton box. Please arrange 225 new carton boxes for next shipment.

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1) For three months, I have been waiting for your reply but still with no answer so far.

2) Please do not keep silent. (or remain silent)

3) The cargo was released. Please redo the inspection for us ASAP.

4) Attached is the "pending" inspection report for PO 12345 & 23456 which has been released. Please revise the report to "passed" for us ASAP.

5) We cannot accept this charge for the new carton box replacement. All purchase orders required 1% of packaging materials to be included with instruction sheet, gift box, and carton box. Please arrange 225 new carton boxes for next shipment.

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This is my attempt:

1. I have been waiting for your reply for three months but still haven't received any answers.

2. Please do not remain silent.

3. The cargo was released, so please redo the inspection for us ASAP.

4. Attached is the "pending" inspection report for PO 12345 and 23456 which had been released. Please revise the report to "Passed" for us ASAP.

5. We cannot accept this charge for the new carton box replacement. (All purchase orders require to have a one-percent packaging material along with an instruction sheet, a gift box, and a carton box. Please arrange to have 225 new carton boxes shipped at the next shipment date.)

The part in parentheses is the part I am not very comfortable with.