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Could you please help me correct these 5 sentences grammatically?
- The nights get shorter and shorter. It's like the more I sleep the more tired I am.

- She has a nice look to her. I'm allowed to find someone pretty even if I do have a wife.
- I'd go out with you except I have plans tonight.
- I hope to scaffolding doesn't come down on your head because of the wind.
- Do you like my newly acquisitioned bag?

Thank you
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-The nights get shorter and shorter. It's like the more i sleep the more tired i feel.
-She has a nice look on her. I'm still allowed to get attracted to someone even if i have a wife.
-I'd go out with you but i have plans tonight.
-I hope the scaffoldings don't hit your head because of the wind.

just my thoughts..
Thank you

Could someone else give me their opinion please?

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