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Hi everyone

This is an essay i translated from Chinese, the original text is bit hard, i think my translation is terrible, please help me to make it more sensible. Thank you! Emotion: smile

The biggest threat is not social turmoil but social decay

Social turmoil means serious social conflicts that threaten the basic framework of the regime system, however social decay is like the necrocytosis and defunctionalization of the body of a society. Figuratively speaking, turmoil is like a healthy body was wounded by others, but decay is like their own tissues or cells becoming diseased.

In recent years, the phenomenon of social decay has clearly emerged. The core issue is the power out of contorl. During the past three decades’ process of reform, Although the framework of market economy have established, but power is still the backbone of our society. Therefore the uncontrollable power is the first thing to display in our society, corruption is just its outward manifestation. Local authority has became neither bound from Governmant nor monitoring from local people, meanwhile there is no checks or balances, officials for their own interest of preserving position or getting promoted. at the expense of system and social benefits. Under such circumstances, corruption has become incontrollable and ”ungovernable”.

That decay has spread to all fields of social life. Hidden rules prevail in the society which are even become the basic method for officials and ordinary citizens, the society have become to anomie and it lost its bottom line. strong interest groups are outrageously, the society trends in Sicilism, and interest groups have no respect for anything, therefore, that cause serious erosion of fairness and justice of society. It is a very common phenomenon that people lost their work ethic and professional ethics, the information system of the entire soceity have become highly distorted.
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or gangsterism (like the Sicilian Mafia).
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It is hard to say if some of the problems here are in the translation or in the original language. However, I will offer you my suggestions for improving these paragraphs. You can decide what is useful. Boldface is new language; cross-outs are deletions of the original language.

The biggest threat is not social turmoil but social decay

Social turmoil means suggests serious social conflicts that threaten the basic framework of the regime system, however while social decay is more like the necrocytosis or and loss of function in defunctionalization of the body of a society. Figuratively speaking, turmoil is like a healthy body being was wounded by outside blows others, but decay is like the tissues or cells of that body their own tissues or cells becoming diseased.

In recent years, the phenomenon of social decay has clearly emerged. The core issue is the that (political) power is uncontrolled out of contorl. During the past three decades' process of reform, Although the framework of market economy have has been established, but power is still the backbone of our society. Therefore the uncontrollable power (of government officials?) is the root problem first thing to display in our society; corruption is just its outward manifestation. Local authority has became is neither bound from by the national government nor monitored by ing from local people. meanwhile Since there is are no checks or balances, officials act for their own interests of preserving position or getting promoted, at the expense of systematic or and social benefits. Under such circumstances, corruption has become uncontrollable and "ungovernable".

That This decay has spread to all fields of social life. Hidden rules prevail in the society, which are even becoming the accepted procedure basic method for officials and ordinary citizens. The society has been swallowed in have become to anomie and it lost its bottom line. Strong interest groups act are outrageously, the society trends in Sicilism (?), and interest groups have no respect for anything. This results in a therefore, that cause serious erosion of fairness and justice of in society. It is a very common phenomenon that people have lost their work ethic and professional ethics, and that the information system of the entire society has have become highly distorted.

(Note: I have no idea what "Sicilism" means.)
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well i made that "Sicilism" up because in the original text, the author wanted to say our society is full of violence till the end , our society is more and more like Sicily that place . It is more like a process to become like Sicily. so i had no idea how to say it in english i just wrote it like "Sicilism" which i know is wrong~!

thank you for correcting my essay Emotion: smile
Well, you could say that "society collapses into tribalism/warlordism/banditry" or something similar.
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