Dear all

I need your help correcting the following email. I would like to learn about your idea whether this email is fine as it might be harsh to ask for a PhD position in this way.

Thanks in advance

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Dear Dr XXX

It was very kind of you writing me and let me have your updated contact addresses. I really miss the time I spent with you and like to see you again and enjoy working with you. I am very glad to hear that (FRIEND'S NAME) returned to (UNIVERSITY NAME) to do research under your supervision. Lucky him!

I am now working in (COMPANY NAME) dealing with problems of more than 20 fields. I was involved in studying two reservoirs of XXX and YYY through which I learned real reservoir characterization. I can now see how the real world differs from the theory. But, I am now overwhelmed with too many questions and I hope I would find an opportunity to do research and try to answer these questions. I should have written to you formally on this request but I would be very pleased if you give me the opportunity to do research under your efficient supervision.

Thank you again!

Sincerely yours

Ahura
Dear Dr ***

It was very kind of you to write me a letter and update me with your new contact addresses. I really miss the time I spent with you. I am looking forward to see you and to work with you again. I am very glad to know that (FRIEND'S NAME) has returned to (UNIVERSITY NAME) to do a research under your supervision. He is lucky!

I am now working with (COMPANY NAME) dealing with the problems of more than 20 fields. I was involved in studying two reservoirs of *** and YYY and was able to learn the real reservoir characterization. I realized how the real world differs from the theory. I still have a lot of questions that need to be answered with regards to ***** . I hope that I will find an opportunity to do a research and be able to answer these questions I have in mind. I would be very pleased if you will also give me the opportunity to do a research under your efficient supervision.

Thank you again!

Sincerely yours

Ahura
Thank you very much Cool_boy.

I am looking forward to get more feed back about the above letter. Your help is appreciated.

Ahura
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Dear Dr ***

It was very kind of you to write me a letter and update me with your new contact addresses. I really miss the time I spent with you. I am looking forward to see you and to work with you again. I am very glad to know that (FRIEND'S NAME) has returned to (UNIVERSITY NAME) to do a research under your supervision. He is lucky!

I am now working with (COMPANY NAME) dealing with the problems of more than 20 fields. I was involved in studying two reservoirs of *** and YYY and was able to learn the real reservoir characterization. I realized how the real world differs from the theory. I still have a lot of questions that need to be answered with regards to *** . I hope that I will find an opportunity to do a research and be able to answer these questions I have in mind. I would be very pleased if you will also give me the opportunity to do a research under your efficient supervision.

Thank you again!

Sincerely yours

Ahura
Dear Dr ***

It was very kind of you to write me a letter and update me with your new contact addresses. I really miss the time I spent working with you, and I am looking forward to seeing and working with you again. I am very glad to know that (FRIEND'S NAME) has returned to (UNIVERSITY NAME) to do research under your supervision. He is lucky!

I am now working with (COMPANY NAME), dealing with the problems of more than 20 fields. I was involved in studying two reservoirs of *** and YYY, and have been able to learn the real character of reservoirs. I now realize how the real world differs from the theory. I still have a lot of questions that need to be answered with regards to *** . I hope that I will find an opportunity to do more research and be able to answer these questions that I have in mind. I would also be very pleased if you would give me the opportunity to do research under your excellent supervision again.

Thank you again!

Sincerely yours,

Ahura