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Hi guys, I want to improve my english skills so try to help me for correcting these sentences. if there is a mistake in specific position do the next thing..

1) delete the mistake then put the right by putting this mark (----) around the right vocabulary.

Simple
Tense


1)
Any player who gets two
yellow cards in a specific football game will be banned from completing the rest
of the game.

Passive
Tense (Simple Tense)


2)
If two yellow cards are
gotten by any football player in a specific football game, he will be banned
from completing the rest of the game.

Future
Tense


3)
Peter will not accompany
his father when he is taking a trip next week although he's in vacation.

Passive
Tense (Future Tense)


4)
The father will not be
accompanied by Peter when he is taking a trip next week although he's in
vacation.
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Hi,

Can you try first, please?

Clive
I will show you how to correct my mistakes

If I wrote .... Peter play the football everyday
so there is a mistake solve it like this .... Peter (plays) the football everyday

thanks
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Hi,

Peter (plays) the football every day.

I don't understand. Do you want to correct all of these yourself, or are you asking other members of the forum to correct them?

Clive
I'm asking all the members in this forum to correct my sentences. it's about 20 sentences in every week except some weeks, so I will post 4 sentences everyday until 5 days, so please help me.
the sentences that need for correcting are as below...

Simple Tense

1) Any player who gets two yellow cards in a specific football game will be banned from completing the rest of the game.

Passive Tense (Simple Tense)

2) If two yellow cards are gotten by any football player in a specific football game, he will be banned from completing the rest of the game.

Future Tense

3) Peter will not accompany his father when he is taking a trip next week although he's in vacation.

Passive Tense (Future Tense)

4) The father will not be accompanied by Peter when he is taking a trip next week although he's in vacation.
Hi,

You understand the tenses, but I've made some other edits to your sentences.Please ask if you don't see why.

Clive

Simple Tense
1) Any player who gets two yellow cards in during a specific football game will be banned from completing it the rest of the game.

Passive Tense (Simple Tense)

2) If two yellow cards are gotten by any football player in a specific football game, he will be banned from completing the rest of the game.

Although correct, this is an awkward thing to say inpassive. My other edits above also apply.

Future Tense

3) Peter will not accompany his father when he is taking a trip next week although Peter's he's in on vacation.

Passive Tense (Future Tense)

4) Peter's The father will not be accompanied by Peter when he is taking a trip next week although Peter's on in vacation.
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thank you so much for your help, to night I will post the second part of my sentences.