To present the real estate business opportunities in xxxxxxxi, we are going to host an event in xxxxxxxl, focused on the xxxxxx investors.

The Miami Real Estate will have a presentation with the latest information about the evolution of the real estate market in Miami in the last year, including the major factors that will influence the residential and commercial real estate market in Miami in the coming years.
Hi alexandremelo;

I've made a few comments on your paragraph.

Regards, AEmotion: stars

The Miami Real Estate (missing word - maybe Conference?) will have a presentations (*) with the latest information about the evolution (changes; evolution is what happens slowly over a very long period of time, from the beginning) of the real estate market in Miami in the last year (over the past year), including (you can't include future things in the past) and also the major factors that will influence the residential and commercial real estate market in Miami in the coming years.

* A conference will not have one presentation. There will be many presentations. However, you can say "At the XXX conference, we will give a presentation ....
Thank you very much for your attention Alphecca. It was very good.

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Alexandre Melo