Hello every body, could someone help me to read and correct my Ml and attached Cv, THANK YOU FORWARD

Re.:Speculative Job Application

Attachment: CV

Dear Sir or Madam Director of Human Resources

I have the honour to come very respectfully by my present letter to request your high benevolence to agree to study carefully my candidature for the engineer position in your company.

Dear Mister, allow me to bring to your attention that I have a Master degree diploma in Physics, option Energetic and Fluid Mechanical, obtained in October 2005 at Physics Department from of Sciences and Technology (U.S.T.H.B).

Dear Sir, I would not be spread out over the detail of my professional mileage, that you will have all the latitude to appreciate with the reading of my CV, or with a possible interview you would like to grant to me. ; But I would like to make you share my willing and my major desire and dream to be within the team work of your department, I have experimented for a year and half in Research and Development Center of Sonatrach (CRD) during the training, my subject of research was: «Complex fluid flow in porous media, Application for enhanced oil recovery using micremulsion/ polymer flooding».During my studies and training, I got increasingly interested in the developing technology for oil production and exploration, and received a deep level of knowledge on enhancement of oil production by chemical flooding. During the year and half of the training, I improved my technical and social skills, my hopes and wishes is to work as an engineer or any other equivalent position in petroleum field.

I feel I have a rang of relevant skills that I can bring to your company. Accuracy, diligence, initiative and ability to adopt and use new information are my leading person features. Additionally, working as a teacher has improved my IT skills: Microsoft Office, and Windows NT/Server administration and so on.

Vacancy in your company attract me because of the possibly to improve my technology knowledge, ability to receive competitive remuneration.

I hope my achievements will qualify me to work for you; and I am thrilled at the idea that I can make avaluable contribution to your company

I am available for interview at any time and look to hear from you.

Yours faithfully,

1. Which country are you applying for vacancies in? This makes a bit of a difference to the language used, for example, your introduction is far too 'florid' for western countries but might be appropriate for another area.

2. Are these 3 alternative starts? If not, you only use the salutation Dear 'X' once, at the start of the letter and not throughout.

3. Salutations - it would be far better to find out the name of the relevant person and address the letter to them. Otherwise you don't seem genuinely interested in their company and it is clear that you are just sending out random applications. If you cannot get the name, then use Dear Sir/Madam. Dear Mister is never used.
Dear Nona, thank you very much for your reply,

for my motivation letter, i am applying for petroleum company located in Algeria, generaly, they use English as business language that is why i writ to them in english. for the name of the RH director, i don't know his or her name.

i corrected what you asked from me, and now please chek it again, thank you forward

yours

Re.:Speculative Job Application

Attachment: CV

Dear Sir or Madam Director of Human Resources

I have the honour to come very respectfully by my present letter to request your high benevolence to agree to study carefully my candidature for the engineer position in your company.

allow me to bring to your attention that I have a Master degree diploma in Physics, option Energetic and Fluid Mechanical, obtained in October 2005 at Physics Department from Houari boumedien University of Sciences and Technology (U.S.T.H.B).

Dear the director, I would not be spread out over the detail of my professional mileage, that you will have all the latitude to appreciate with the reading of my CV, or with a possible interview you would like to grant to me. ; But I would like to make you share my willing and my major desire and dream to be within the team work of your department, I have experimented for a year and half in Research and Development Center of Sonatrach (CRD) during the training, my subject of research was: «Complex fluid flow in porous media, Application for enhanced oil recovery using micremulsion/ polymer flooding».During my studies and training, I got increasingly interested in the developing technology for oil production and exploration, and received a deep level of knowledge on enhancement of oil production by chemical flooding. During the year and half of the training, I improved my technical and social skills, my hopes and wishes is to work as an engineer or any other equivalent position in petroleum field.

I feel I have a rang of relevant skills that I can bring to your company. Accuracy, diligence, initiative and ability to adopt and use new information are my leading person features. Additionally, working as a teacher has improved my IT skills: Microsoft Office, and Windows NT/Server administration and so on.

Vacancy in your company attract me because of the possibly to improve my technology knowledge, ability to receive competitive remuneration.

I hope my achievements will qualify me to work for you; and I am thrilled at the idea that I can make avaluable contribution to your company

I am available for interview at any time and look to hear from you.

Yours faithfully,