Hi everybody,

I wrote out a cover letter and I tried to put it as personal as possible but I am not quite sure about the outcome. Unfortunately, my poor English doesn't give me a hand, so I beg your help!!! Could you check it and give me feedback?

Thanks a lot

Dear…

If you are looking for a young and energetic person who is seeking new challenges I would like to encourage you to consider my application for an internship or entry-level position starting from fall 2006.

My name is Daniele Fraboschi, I am 26 years old and I am Italian.

After having graduated in Law and Economics at the University of Padua in November 2004, I had the opportunity of working for Vodafone Italy in the customer care department where I firstly experienced a fairly passion for marketing issues. My strong attitude for business and marketing topics has always been going forward side by side with the desire to gain an international experience. Thereby, I decided to enforce my economic background by attending an international postgraduate programme (MIEX Master in International Business - www.miex.unibo.it ), co-organized by ICN Grande Ecole de Management de Nancy (France), University of Bologna (Italy), La Salle University (Mexico), and MGIMO Institute (Russia) and ECUST Institute of Shanghai (China).

Once the 6 month teaching period was over, I enthusiastically joined a work team, within a consulting firm, leading to create international marketing plans for small and medium size enterprises. It was last April when I took part of the project and I am still engaged on that. Analysing industrial and customers markets, clients and competitors as well as performing strategic and financial analysis are the main activities I have been involving in. To a large extent, the capabilities I have, so far, acquired are due also to the sophisticated methodological support provided by L.E.K. Consulting (one of the leading worldwide consulting firm).

Although I found myself fitting particularly well into the organization I am working for, I strongly believe that gaining international experience is a necessary step forward to my career aspiration. Now I am not motivated to move abroad because I find it somewhat interesting but because I am devoted to it. Since very long ago, I have never lost sight of my long-term goal: to become an internationalization promoter who attains a management position as international business developer.

I am sure that being entailed at ***, which is well known for its outstanding working standards, represents a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity.

I am pleased to supply further information in support of my application and look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,
Dear…

If you are looking for a young and energetic person who seeks new challenges, I would like to encourage you to consider my application for an internship or entry-level position starting from fall 2006.

My name is Daniele Fraboschi, I am 26 years old and I am Italian.

After having graduated in Law and Economics at the University of Padua in November 2004, I had the opportunity of working for Vodafone Italy in the customer care department. This is where I first experienced a flaring passion for marketing issues. My strong attitude for business and marketing topics has always been going forward side-by-side with the desire to gain international experience. Thereby, I decided to enforce my economic background by attending an international postgraduate programme (MIEX Master in International Business - www.miex.unibo.it ), co-organized by ICN Grande Ecole de Management de Nancy (France), University of Bologna (Italy), La Salle University (Mexico), and MGIMO Institute (Russia) and ECUST Institute of Shanghai (China).

Once the 6 month teaching period was over, I enthusiastically joined a work team within a consulting firm, leading to create international marketing plans for small and medium size enterprises. That project begain last April and I am still engaged in that. Analysing industrial and customers markets, clients and competitors as well as performing strategic and financial analysis are the main activities I have been involved in. To a large extent, the capabilities I have acquired so far are due to the sophisticated methodological support provided by L.E.K. Consulting (one of the leading worldwide consulting firms).

Although I found myself fitting particularly well into the organization, I strongly believe that gaining international experience is a necessary step forward in my career's aspiration. Now I am not motivated to move abroad because I find it somewhat interesting but because I am devoted to it. For a long time I have not lost sight of my long-term goal of becoming an internationalization promoter who attains a management position as international business developer.

I am sure that being entailed at ***, which is well known for its outstanding working standards, represents a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity.

I would be pleased to supply any further information in support of my application and look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,
(The part highlighted in blue, to me, doesn't make sense)
Hope that helps Daniele =]! By the way, I find Italian a beautiful language =]!
Liam
Thanks a lot!

It sounds much better!!!

Nice to hear Italian is a beutiful language!

Daniele