+0

The graph shows the population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and comparioson where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The given line graph gives information about population growth tendency in China and India since 2000 and anticipates that number until 2050.

In general, over the 50-year period, India’s population seems to be ascending at a steady space, whereas China is expected to witness a continuous increase and hit a peak in 2030 then begin to fall. A highlight of the graph is that India and China record the same population data in the year 2030.

In 2000, the population of China was significantly higher in comparison with that of India. The number of Chinese was 1.25 billion, whereas India’s population stood at 1 billion. In the next two decades, China’s citizens rose steadily to reach just above 1.4 billion people in 2020. Over the same period, India’s population curve saw a remarkable increase of around 0.4 billion.

As can be seen from the figure, the estimations after 2020 show that on one hand, China’s population remains somewhere around 1.45 billion until 2035, after which it is likely to fall gradually, reaching 1.4 billion by 2050. On the other hand. India’s population will probably experience a remarkable rise and hit 1.6 billion in 2050. It is in 2030 that India and China are both forecasted to have 1.45 billion people living in their country, according to the experts.

+0

Please post essays, paragraphs, dialogues and other writing in the essay forum so a moderator does not have to move your post.
https://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm

Please attach an image of what you are writing about. We cannot help you if we can't see the figure.

Please put the essay instructions with your answer in the message body.

Subject: Please review my IELTS essay

Message body:
Topic: Put the essay instructions here.

My essay:

(Your text here...)
---------------------

Please read my advice for Task 1 essays. You make the usual vocabulary errors.

IELTS TASK 1: Hints, Tips And Advice

Vocabulary Words For Task 1: Reference Post


---------------------------------------

Comments  
Teachers: We supply a list of EFL job vacancies

Topic: The graph shows the population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and comparioson where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

My essay:

The given line graph gives information about population growth tendency in China and India since 2000 and anticipates that number until 2050.

In general, over the 50-year period, India’s population seems to be ascending at a steady space, whereas China is expected to witness a continuous increase and hit a peak in 2030 then begin to fall. A highlight of the graph is that India and China record the same population data in the year 2030.

In 2000, the population of China was significantly higher in comparison with that of India. The number of Chinese was 1.25 billion, whereas India’s population stood at 1 billion. In the next two decades, China’s citizens rose steadily to reach just above 1.4 billion people in 2020. Over the same period, India’s population curve saw a remarkable increase of around 0.4 billion.

As can be seen from the figure, the estimations after 2020 show that on one hand, China’s population remains somewhere around 1.45 billion until 2035, after which it is likely to fall gradually, reaching 1.4 billion by 2050. On the other hand. India’s population will probably experience a remarkable rise and hit 1.6 billion in 2050. It is in 2030 that India and China are both forecasted to have 1.45 billion people living in their country, according to the experts.

The given (Do not use "given" or "provided" It is not natural English.) line graph gives information about (That is very vague and non-specific what exactly is plotted on the graph?) population growth tendency (wrong word) in China and India since from 2000 to the present and predicts / forecasts / projects anticipates that number until 2050.

In general, over the 50-year period, India’s population seems to be ascending at a steady space, (wrong word) whereas China is expected to witness (wrong word) a continuous increase and hit a peak in 2030 then begin to fall. A highlight of the graph is that India and China record (wrong word) are forecast to have equal numbers of people the same population data in the year 2030.

In 2000, the population of China was significantly higher in comparison with that of India. The number of Chinese was 1.25 billion, whereas India’s population stood at 1 billion. In the next two decades, China’s citizens rose (wrong phrasing) steadily to reach just above 1.4 billion people in 2020. Over the same period, India’s population curve saw (wrong word. Curves do not have vision. They cannot see.) had an a remarkable increase of around 0.4 billion.

As can be seen from the figure, (Useless "filler" Those words do not give the reader any information.) the estimations after 2020 show that on one hand, China’s population remains somewhere around 1.45 billion until 2035, after which it is likely to fall gradually, reaching 1.4 billion by 2050. On the other hand. India’s population will probably experience a remarkable rise and hit 1.6 billion in 2050. It is in 2030 that India and China are both forecasted to have 1.45 billion people living in their country (Do not make such comments. Just describe the graphic.) , according to the experts.

Sample essay:

The line graph plots the populations of India and China over a fifty-year period, from 2000 to the present day, 2020, with a projection to 2050.

Overall, the population of China is expected to continue its current growth, but reach a peak between 2025 and 2030 and thereafter go down. In contrast, India's population will have a sustained period of growth, but the growth rate is predicted to slow after 2020.

In detail, both populations are currently going up, but India has a higher growth rate. Starting at 1.25 billion in 2000, China has added 160 million over the past 20 years. In comparison, India started with fewer people, 1.0 billion, but it has grown twice as much, adding 320 million. These trends are expected to continue for another five years, when the two populations are forecast to be 1.45 billion each. At that point, China will cease to grow, and is predicted to end with slightly less than 1.4 billion in 2050. India's growth rate is projected to moderate. At its current pace (2000-2020) it would have ended with over1.8 billion, but the numbers are instead expected to be about 1.6 billion.


See my notes on the graph:

Site Hint: Check out our list of pronunciation videos.