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Thank Teechr so much!
I have intention to re-write this essay again based on all your comments. I will re-write it and post it in this essay! Hope that all you will continue to help me!

Okay, but do not change anything else in it. You've got all the paragraphs now, so just put them together and post the revised version below.

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