Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more popular.

Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Online shopping of products like books, flight tickets and edibles is turning out to be exceedingly popular. This essay will argue that despite some limitations on physical examination and the delivery time of items bought online, the benefits of shopping without visiting shops and huge discounts on products due to low overhead costs far outweigh any drawbacks.


On the one hand, online purchasing has some limitations. First, the products purchased online cannot be examined physically for quality and one should rely on product reviews, which can sometimes be fake. Besides this, online shopping is not suitable for last-minute purchases as the delivery time varies from days to weeks. Furthermore, if the product is not up to the expectations, returning and replacing the product can add up some time from days to weeks. However, online shopping can make life happier and satisfactory if purchased from trusted and reliable merchandise like Amazon.


On the brighter side, online shopping is extremely convenient. These days people have hectic schedules and they hardly get time to visit stores for purchasing. Online shopping is a boon for people like this. It eliminates the necessity to physically visit the store and instead purchase things by tapping a few buttons. Also, online stores have huge discounts on their products. The prices of products are also comparatively low due to less operational costs like commercial rents and utility bills. The price of products can be compared to different sellers before getting the best buy. These factors can be beneficial in terms of time and financial savings.


In conclusion, a shortage of time, variety of options and price discounts far outweigh the limitations of being not able to physically examine the product and due to the time constraints.

Online shopping of products like books, flight tickets and food edibles is turning out to be exceedingly popular. This essay will argue that (Do not mention your essay. The purpose of your essay is to present arguments on a point of view. Just state your point of view in a thesis statement. Do not tell the reader the purpose of the essay; they know that. ) Despite some limitations on physical examination and the delivery time of items bought online, the benefits of this way of shopping, not having to travel and obtaining high without visiting shops and huge discounts on products due to low overhead costs, far outweigh these any drawbacks.


Your sentence as written did not make any sense. The first clause described two drawbacks. The main clause then gives two benefits and states they outweigh the drawbacks you mentioned at the beginning.


On the one hand, online purchasing has some limitations. First, the products purchased online cannot be examined physically for quality and one has to should rely on product reviews, which can sometimes be fake. Besides this, online shopping is not suitable for last-minute purchases needed immediately as the delivery time varies from days to weeks. Furthermore, if the product is not up to the expectations, returning and replacing the product can take add up some time from days to weeks. However, online shopping can make life happier and satisfactory if purchased from trusted and reliable vendors / suppliers merchandise like Amazon.


On the other hand, brighter side, online shopping is extremely convenient. These days people have hectic schedules and they hardly get time to visit stores for purchasing. Online shopping is a boon for people like this. It eliminates the necessity to physically visit the store (This is a bit repetitive.) and instead they can purchase things anytime and anywhere on their smart phone. by tapping a few buttons. Also, online stores have huge ("huge" is not an academic word.) significant / major / large / impressive discounts on their products. The prices of products are also comparatively low due to less operational costs like commercial rents and utility bills. The price of products can be compared to between different sellers before getting to get the best buy. These factors can be beneficial in terms of time and financial savings. (repetitious)

In conclusion, a shortage of time, variety of options and price discounts far outweigh the limitations of being not able to physically examine the product and having to wait some time for the product to arrive. due to the time constraints.


Thanks for the corrections.