In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying.

To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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It is argued that the hardcopy media like newspapers and books will be out of sales in future and everything will be available for reading to the public for free of cost. This essay agrees with the statement because of the ease of using electronic media and vast data sources available over the Internet for free.

The use of electronic media has become more comfortable than ever with the advancement of technology. The availability of electronic gadgets like mobiles and other devices has made it easy to access media like newspapers and books on the go in hand. In that regard, the purchase of printed books and newspapers is expected to fall in the future, with people preferring to read them on their electronic gadgets instead of hard copies. For instance, with Kindle, a reading application, one can have up to 200 books in a device, ready to read on tap of a button, whereas it is next to impossible to carry those many books physically.

With the Internet expanding over the board day by day, the same reflects the availability of enormous data resources over the Internet. The vast resources available on the web give the users free access to ample options and the freedom to choose their information. This is not possible with purchasing books or any other printed media, as it may prove unrealistic and expensive. For example, we can access several IELTS materials on the Internet for free of cost, whereas it is hard to buy or access those many hardcopy publications.

In conclusion, technological advancements of electronic devices are making easy access to any printed media electronically and the abundance of resources available over the web may force people not to buy the printed media and access them for free.

Imo, you do a good job with your essay. Using wide range of vocabulary as well as grammar, answering the question. Well done

It is argued that the hardcopy media like newspapers and books in paper format will be out of sales disappear in future and everything will be available for reading to the public online for free. of cost. This essay agrees I tend to agree with the statement. [ 1] because of the ease of using electronic media and vast data sources available over the Internet for free.

The use of electronic media has become more [ 2] comfortable widespread than ever with the advancement of technology. The availability of electronic gadgets like mobiles and other devices has made it easy/convenient to access media like newspapers and books on the go. in hand. In that regard, the purchase of printed books and newspapers is expected to fall in the future, with people preferring to read them on their electronic gadgets instead of hard copies. For instance, with Kindle, a reading application, one can have up to 200 hundreds of books in on a device, ready to read on with the tap of a button, whereas it is next to without the need to carry them around, which is practically impossible. to carry those many books physically.

With the Internet expanding all the time, over the board day by day, the same reflects the availability of an enormous data diversity of reading resources over the Internet. The vast resources available on the web gives the users free people access to ample options and the freedom to choose from, and often free of charge because of the competition. their information. This is not possible with purchasing books or any other printed media, as it may prove unrealistic and expensive. For example, we can access several IELTS materials on the Internet for free of at no cost, whereas it is hard, or not even possible, to buy or access those many as hardcopy publications for free.

In conclusion, technological advancements of electronic devices are making the internet has made it easy to access to any printed published media electronically for free, and the abundance of resources available over the web may force people not to buy will likely lead to the demise the printed media in the future. and access them for free.

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[ 1]: Do not include specific findings in the introduction. That kind of information belongs in the conclusion.

[ 2]: You are confusing “convenient” with “comfortable”, but in that, even “convenient” does not fit.

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Vic001Imo, you do a good job with your essay. Using wide range of vocabulary as well as grammar, answering the question. Well done

Your assessment is inaccurate. Since you're not an IELTS examiner, a teacher or a proficient speaker, please refrain from making such comments in future. (I have not bothered to correct the mistakes in your post).

I'm sorry, I won't do it again

Vic001I'm sorry. I won't do it again.

OK. I understand your intention was good, but inaccurate advice and suggestions can complicate things. Emotion: wink

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