You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

It is argued that doing the same things and changing things are wasteful while others considers that change does people good all the time. However, I'm personally convinced that life must have changes to get better.


There are several justfiable reasons for that. Firstly, changing things creates new experience. For example, if a wifehouse just make a dish day by day, then one day, her family, even she, will definitely are extremely bored with the family meals. This situation is different only if her family try new dishes. Or if a person is always up to ears with their office work but spends time traveling, they will never know how beautiful mountains are, how wonderful sea is, and how amazing places are. Secondly, changing one's mind makes their life better. For instant, if the laws in some countries keep suggesting that people in LGBT community are those who commit crimes, then those people will never be willing and confident to contribute to this world. Or some harmful old traditions like stealing wives, or getting married as a child will be removed when people's minds change. Next, changing makes creativity. For example, when a student has a thought to change their study and do it, they can find something interesting and create an effective way to study.


By contrast, keeping doing the same things causes people to be fed up. Every day, every month and every year, they just do the too familiar things, then they are similar to robots. Moreover, avoiding change never make the world developed. Life will always surrounded by bad tradition, old-fashioned techniques and poor health service. One day, people will be extinct.


In conclusion, life never operates well without change. To make a better world, we always keep changing to have a more practical, effective vision. Change is not losing wonderful things, but making them more wonderful.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.


It is argued that doing the same things and changing things are wasteful while others considers that change does people good all the time. However, I'm personally convinced that life must have changes to get better.


There are several justfiable reasons for that. Firstly, changing things creates new experience. For example, if a wifehouse just make a dish day by day, then one day, her family, even she, will definitely are extremely bored with the family meals. This situation is different only if her family try new dishes. Or if a person is always up to ears with their office work but spends time traveling, they will never know how beautiful mountains are, how wonderful sea is, and how amazing places are. Secondly, changing one's mind makes their life better. For instant, if the laws in some countries keep suggesting that people in LGBT community are those who commit crimes, then those people will never be willing and confident to contribute to this world. Or some harmful old traditions like stealing wives, or getting married as a child will be removed when people's minds change. Next, changing makes creativity. For example, when a student has a thought to change their study and do it, they can find something interesting and create an effective way to study.


By contrast, keeping doing the same things causes people to be fed up. Every day, every month and every year, they just do the too familiar things, then they are similar to robots. Moreover, avoiding change never make the world developed. Life will always surrounded by bad tradition, old-fashioned techniques and poor health service. One day, people will be extinct.


In conclusion, life never operates well without change. To make a better world, we always keep changing to have a more practical, effective vision. Change is not losing wonderful things, but making them more wonderful.

It is argued that doing the same things and changing things are wasteful (That does not make sense. It says "This is an apple and it is also not an apple. Also, the topic is not "wasteful". There is no reason in the topic. ) while others considers (wrong verb form) that change does people good all the time. However, I'm (Do not use contractions in formal writing.) personally convinced that life must have changes to get better.


There are several justfiable reasons for embracing change. that. Firstly, First, changing things creates new experiences. For example, if a wifehouse housewife just makes the same a dish day by day, then one day, her family, even she, will definitely are ("Will are " is ungrammatical ) extremely bored with the family meals. This situation is different only if her family try (wrong verb form) new dishes. Or if a person is always up to ears (Do not use idioms if you cannot use them correctly. Idioms are precise phrases. You have not used it correctly.) with their office work but spends time traveling, (That makes no sense. If they spend time traveling, they will see mountains and the sea and other places. ) they will never know how beautiful mountains are, how wonderful sea is, and how amazing places are. Secondly, Second, changing one's mind can make makes their life better. (It can also make it worse!) For instant, (wrong word. An "instant" is a very short period of time, less than one second.) if the laws in some countries keep suggesting that people in the LGBT community are those who commit crimes, then those people will never be willing and confident to contribute to this world. (That is off topic. The topic is about people who do not choose to make any changes in their lives, such as getting more education, moving to a new city, or quitting their job to start a new business. It is not about changing the laws.) Or some harmful old traditions like stealing wives, or getting married as a child will be removed when people's minds change. (Off topic. It is not about change in beliefs or traditions.) Next, changing makes creativity. For example, when a student has a thought to change their study and do it, they can find something interesting and create an effective way to study.

(You did not follow the essay instructions. It is "Discuss both these views." You have only discussed only one of the views, that is the attitude of the people who embrace change.)

By contrast, keeping doing the same things causes people to be fed up. (wrong expression - "fed up" means to feel disgusted. ) Every day, every month and every year, they just do the too familiar things, then they are similar to robots. Moreover, avoiding change never make (wrong verb form) the world developed. Life will always surrounded by bad tradition, old-fashioned techniques and poor health service. One day, people will be extinct.(Off topic)

In conclusion, life never operates well without change. To make a better world, we always keep changing to have a more practical, effective vision. (Doo not add any new ideas in the conclusion. You have to put this idea in a body paragraph.) Change is not losing wonderful things, but making them more wonderful.