Hello all.
I am new here and I hope someone who's native in Eng. can help me. (ASAP)
I need to turn this in to my boss by tomorrow.
This must be a formal invitation letter.
Please check my grammar and also my writing style (I know it's really bad)
Thank you in advanceEmotion: smile

Dear Sir or Madam,

With the growth in advertising business in Japan today, AAA(company name)interacts with both domestic firms as well as number of multinational companies. With this progression, AAA is holding an annual seminar in Mt. Fuji, Japan. AAA and BBB(another host) are inviting only few important transnational firms’ top directors.
This year’s trip is sponsored by AAA and all the expenses will be paid by AAA. Also AAA’s CEO Mr. John B will be attending and it will be a wonderful opportunity to promote your business’ advertisement plan and interest as well as interact with other multinational firm’s top executive attendees.
The conference will also provide you with an occasion to communicate with influential enterprises and entrepreneurs both from home and abroad.
The picturesque landscape of Mt. Fuji is very pleasant in the month of April. You will really enjoy your stay there and it will be very valuable occasion.

We would like to mention you that the registration time is until 8 April. Please tell us if you would attend this special trip by completing the letter of confirmation and please fax or e-mail us so that we can make some arrangements for you.

We cordially invite you to participate in this seminar and wish you every success.

Yours faithfully,
It sounds perfect to me!
Today’s Mr. Martin Quincy 641 Lexington avenue new York, NY 1002

Dear Mr. Quincy: we are pleased to announce the opening of a new subsidiary of our company. We specialize the selling, training and services of portable personal computers. This may be hard to believe, but we carry portable personal computers that can do everything a conventional desktop can. Our portables can run all of the same applications as your company’s conventional PCS. With the purchase of a computer, we will train two employees of your firm on how to use an application of a choice. For a free demonstration, call us at 212-555-9876 we are available from 9:00 am to 5:00 p.m.

Sincerely: Theresa Mann president tm/yo