Topic: Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?


When looking back ten years ago, the world was a completely different place than it is today. This is because of the development of superior technologies in human life. The evolution in technology has affected the method that we interact with another one. People usually dispute whether this advancement gives any negative effects between human relationships. In my opinion, the technology development has both positive and negative contribution to the communication between each other.

There are several methods that the advance of technology has influenced on people’s interaction. For example: the online social media application has reduced the time to send the message or get reply from other people. Earlier, people had to wait such a long time to deliver the messages via post to the receivers, however nowadays everyone can convey their message instantly without any interference through some digital applications like Skype, Facebook, WhatsApp, and so on. Furthermore, these applications help us to update the newest information about individual such as hobby, birthday, daily routine, and these offer an opportunity to understand more about other people. One more thing, by the help of virtual technology, an individual can meet and make friends with anyone from any corner of the world just by sitting in front of an internet-connected computer.

However, the impact of the technology may not always be positive in one’s social life. The advancement of social media has made people less sociable. We are now gradually reducing face to face interactions and prefer conducting out the communication via smart phones instead. Moreover, people, especially young people, they might lose the way to express their opinions, feelings or many aspects of personal communication. This is because of attracting of many online interesting things, like games, online entertainment shows, and so on.

The new age technology offers an incredible impact on the way people interact, and there are also some drawbacks that people must prevent of.

When looking back Ten years ago, the world was a completely different place than it is today. This is because of the development of superior new technologies in human life. The evolution in technology has affected the methods by which that we interact with another one. People usually dispute whether this advancement has had gives any negative effects on between human relationships. In my opinion, the technology development has made both positive and negative contributions to the communication between each other.

(That is not exactly the topic question. It is about the types of relationships that people make aided by technology, not the adverse or beneficial effects on traditional or existing relationships.)

There are several methods (wrong word) that the advance of technology has influenced on people’s interactions. For example: the online social media application has reduced the time to send the message or get reply from other people. Earlier, people had to wait such a long time for messages to be delivered to deliver the messages via post to the receivers, however nowadays everyone can convey their message instantly without any interference through some digital applications like Skype, Facebook, and WhatsApp, and so on. Furthermore, these applications help us to update the newest information about individual such as hobby, birthday, daily routine, (ungrammatical series) and these offer an opportunity for us to understand more about other people. One more thing, by the help of virtual technology, an individual can meet and make friends with anyone from any corner of the world just by sitting in front of an internet-connected computer.

However, the impact of the technology may not always be positive in one’s social life. The advancement of social media has made people less sociable. (off-topic) We are now gradually reducing face to face interactions and prefer conducting out the communication via smart phones instead. Moreover, people, especially young people, they might lose the way to express their opinions, feelings or many aspects of personal communication. This is because of attracting of (wrong expression) many online interesting things, like games, online entertainment shows, and so on. (Do not use ellipses, "etc." or expressions like "and so on" in formal essays.)

The new age technology offers an incredible impact on the way people interact, and there are also some drawbacks that people must prevent of. (wrong word) (That is off-topic.)

Thank you very much for your help.