Nha Trang is one of the most important tourist hubs of Vietnam, thanks to its beautiful beaches with fine and clean sand and the clear ocean water with mild temperatures all year round. There are several resorts—such as Nha Trang Vinpearl Land Resort, Diamond Bay and Ana Mandara—and amusement and water parks, both in the city and on islands off the coast. The possibly most beautiful street of Nha Trang is Tran Phu Street along the seaside, sometimes referred to as the Pacific Coast Highway of Vietnam.

Nha Trang beach city is well known for its pristine beaches and excellent scuba diving and is fast becoming a popular destination for international tourists, attracting large numbers of backpackers as well as more affluent travelers on the Southeast Asia circuit. It is already very popular with Vietnamese tourists. Nha Trang Bay is widely considered as amongst the world's most beautiful bays. Tourists are welcome to participate in the Sea Festival, held biennially. Nha Trang was the site of the Miss Universe 2008 Pageant on July 14, 2008 and it will also host Miss World 2010.

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bee piano 181Sorry for my mistake in the title tittle which I wrote. This was not an essay. This is only 2 small paragraphs in my report. Please give me feedback on my paragraphs. Thank you so much

Your teacher should give you a zero score, a failing mark, for these paragraphs. Do you know why?

I don't know why. Can you explain for me ? Thank you.

Because you did not write all of it yourself. You copied sentences from this web site:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nha_Trang

Copying someone else's text and not referring to the source is call plagiarism. In IELTS, your writing will be carefully examined for evidence of plagiarism. If any is found, you get a 0 band score.

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Sorry for my fault. I didn't explain clearly about it before. However, to be honest I don't know this essay from wikipedia. I just copied it from page on Facebook. Furthermore, because I didn't post fully my ideas so that you told me "plagiarism" that's right. But In my report, I had wrote reference but here is not. And I want to explain that I posted these paragraph because I want to check grammar these.

And that is all my paragraph in my report.

Nha Trang is one of the most important tourist hubs of Vietnam, thanks to its beautiful beaches, clean sand and the clear ocean water with mild temperatures all year round. There are several resorts—such as Nha Trang Vinpearl Land Resort, Diamond Bay and Ana Mandara—and amusement and water parks, both in the city and on islands off the coast. The possibly most beautiful street of Nha Trang is Tran Phu Street along the seaside, sometimes referred to as the Pacific Coast Highway of Vietnam.

Basing on that, I would like to mention Nha Trang beach which are well-known for the white sandy beaches with beautiful sightseeings. And there is a wide array of activities such as surfing, snorkelling, scuba diving…. The report involves in a course named English Language Praticum from Faculty of Foreign Language. As students who attended this with the need for studying and practising, Nha Trang beach is the suitable choices for us not only to get valuable data but also to gain experience and knowledge from the assignment.

Do you understand what I mean?:-(

anonymousDo you understand what I mean?:-(

Yes, I know exactly what you mean. Some Facebook user (a "friend" of yours?) copied it from WIkipedia and then you copied it from their Facebook page. You did not write your own text because the Wiki text is excellent.

So if I check this writing, I will not be checking your writing. That will not help you improve your English, will it? It will only say that you know how to copy and paste from web sites.


Sorry, it is for my fault. I didn't explain it clearly about it before. However, to be honest I didn't don't know that the sentences were copied this essay from wikipedia. I just copied it from a page on Facebook page. Furthermore, because I didn't post fully my ideas so that you told me that is was "plagiarism." That's right. But In in my report, I had wrote a reference but here is not here. And I want to explain that I posted these paragraph s because I wanted to check the grammar checked. these.

anonymousNha Trang is one of the most important tourist hubs of Vietnam, thanks to its beautiful beaches, clean sand and the clear ocean water with mild temperatures all year round. There are several resorts—such as Nha Trang Vinpearl Land Resort, Diamond Bay and Ana Mandara—and amusement and water parks, both in the city and on islands off the coast. The possibly most beautiful street of Nha Trang is Tran Phu Street along the seaside, sometimes referred to as the Pacific Coast Highway of Vietnam.


The text above is perfect grammar. It was published in a guidebook for tourists and copied exactly. You did not write this text, so you must quote it and give a reference. https://vietnamuniquetours.com/guide-book/vietnam-guide/nha-trang/

anonymousBasing on that, I would like to mention Nha Trang beach which are well-known for the white sandy beaches with beautiful sightseeings. And there is a wide array of activities such as surfing, snorkelling, scuba diving…. The report involves in a course named English Language Praticum from Faculty of Foreign Language. As students who attended this with the need for studying and practising, Nha Trang beach is the suitable choices for us not only to get valuable data but also to gain experience and knowledge from the assignment.

Now this paragraph is not good English. Some of the phrases may have been copied, though. What does the course have to do with a tourist attraction?

Basing (wrong form) on that, I would like to mention Nha Trang beach which are (wrong form) well-known (no hyphen) for the white sandy beaches with beautiful sightseeings. (wrong form. sightseeing is a non-count noun.) And there is a wide array of activities such as surfing, snorkelling, scuba diving…. (Do not use ellipses in a report.) The report involves (wrong word) in a course named English Language Praticum from Faculty of Foreign Language. As students who attended this with the need for studying and practising, Nha Trang beach (wrong grammar. Misplaced modifier. Nha Trang beach is not a student.) is the a suitable choices for us not only to get valuable data (What kind of data are you going to collect at the beach?) but also to gain experience and knowledge from the assignment.

Thank you for your comments.


In my report, I had given a reference. However, I want to explain about these which I quoted and posted here. If I knew these paragraph from wikipedia, I would not post here and checked again. Because I quoted it from friend on Facebook so I not sure about their grammar . Therefore, I posted here and checked their grammar, I didn't mean that I checked which wikipedia wrote. In the future, if I quote someone text, I will carefully examine and afterward, if I post, I will post my writing. Sorry for misunderstanding.

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