Boss would like to sell our unit which we are occupying now. Actually it is sold already and will be released on 28th this month. So we need to relocate another unit.
The buyer come to our unit just one time, then he buy it. In fact, the renovations are new. We only occupied this unit for two years. The colour of the wall are painting in yellow. How sharp it is! The ground is PVC with green colour. The colour of venetian blinds are grey. We get sufficient lighting in our unit as there are many windows in "L" shape. We also has a pantry. The colour of the cabinets are simply white. You can't say it is beautiful but it is simple and clean enough. Next to the pantry, there is a smaller room. Heard that it is originally a toilet and the appearance is not good. Before occupying, we renovate it to a room. As a result, one more room can be used.
I think boss has a clever idea! First, he lead the buyer viewing our unit. Next, he lead the buyer to another unit which the renovation isn't new and a lot of sundry goods there, and there are two windows only. Of course, the appearance of the first unit is good.
To be honest, I am quite satisfying with my existing sit. But now, I need to say goodbye to it!
Diary! I wrote it to all of you, and get some comments on any grammatical mistakes.
Because our office has been relocated, I wrote the above of office relocation, I lose the location which I satisfy with it. So I to say goodbye to the old office which I liked. my sit.
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Boss would like to sell our unit which we are occupying now. Actually it is sold already and will be released on the 28th this month. So we need to relocate to another unit.
The buyer come to our unit just one time, then and he decided to buy it. In fact, the renovations furniture and fittings are new. We’ve only occupied this unit for two years. The colour of the wall are painting in yellow. How is a nice sharp yellow. it is! The ground floor is green PVC tiles. with green colour. The colour of Venetian blinds are grey. We get sufficient lighting in our unit as there are many windows arranged in an "L" shape. We also has have a pantry. The colour of the cabinets are is simply white. You can't say it is beautiful, but it is simple and clean. enough. Next to the pantry, there is a smaller room. Heard that it is was originally a toilet and the appearance is it did not look good. Before occupying, moving in, we renovated it and turned it into a room. As a result, one more room can be used.
I think boss has had a clever idea! First, he lead the buyer viewing our unit. Next, he lead led the buyer to another unit which the renovation isn't as new, and has a lot of clutter, sundry goods there, and there are two windows only. Of course, the appearance of the first unit is better. good.
To be honest, I am quite like our office unit, satisfying with my existing sit. but now, I need to say goodbye to it!
1- Who are you writing that to?
2- What does the last sentence mean?
Diary! Write to all of you, and get some comment on grammatical mistake.
Because of office relocation, I lose the location which I satisfy with it. So I say goodbye to my sit.
Thank you teechr. But can you explain the combination of “nice sharp yellow”? “isn’t as new”, why “as” is added?
In the above, "yellow" is a noun, and "nice" and "sharp" are adjectives that modify it. This is not uncommon in English. For example:
"The dress was a gaudy bright blue."
"Her face was a pale ghostly yellow".
"The floor was a dull slimy green".
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I changed the meaning slightly. I just thought that making the second unit not totally old is more authentic/likely. If you want to revert to the original meaning, you can just omit "as".
I only know to use one adjective to modify a noun.
I know! The word "as" is used in comparison.