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I have already corrected the following passage and yet i find errors which i cannot correct can someone please help!!!!

I arrived at Bath yesterday.There is a college in this town where i'll syudy English for two weeks.When we arrived at the college we went to our bedroom.I stay in bed-room with my best friend and I'm very happy for this.

At eight o'clock we had dinner and then we have visited the college.It is beautiful and there is also a swimming pool.Then we came back to our bedroom where I chatted with my friend for a long time.We both happy and we both hope to have a good time at the college.Unfortunately, the weather isn't very good yesterday rained and today too but i think that the weather isn't very important.

Thanks.
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Hi Shasam,

Here's my version of your essay:

I arrived at Bath yesterday.There is a college in this town where I'll be studying English for two weeks.When {we}arrived at the college we went to our bedroom.I stayed in my best friend's bedroom and I'm very happy for this.

At eight o'clock we had dinner and then visited the college.It was beautiful ,it has a swimming pool.Then we came back to our bedroom where I chatted with my friend for a long time.

(next paragraph)

We are both happy and (delete we both) hope to have a good time at the college. Unfortunately, the weather isn't very good.It has been raining since yesterday but i think that the weather isn't that important.

{we} - it's appropriate to mention who is we.
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I'll give it a try too Emotion: smile

I arrived in Bath yesterday.There is a college in this town where I'll be studying English for two weeks.When we arrived at the college we went to our bedrooms.I stay in bed-room with my best friend and I'm very happy for this. My best friend and I are in the same bedroom

At eight o'clock we had dinner and then we visited the college.It is beautiful and there is also a swimming-pool.Then we went back to our bedroom where I chatted with my friend for a long time.We are both happy and hope to have a good time at the college.Unfortunately, the weather isn't very good: yesterday it rained /it rained all yesterday, and today it is raining too, but I think that the weather isn't very/that important.
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