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Last Sunday was a fine day. I was waiting for a bus at the bus stop. Suddenly I heard the screeching of brakes. I looked up just in time to see a car on the opposite side of the road ran into a cyclist.

The cyclist was bleeding profusely and groaning in pain. This awful accident attracted the attention of almost all the people in the neighbourhood. In a few minutes, there was a large crowd. A kind man immedidately ran to a nearby telephone booth and telephone for the police and the ambulance. Some of the passengers from the car and the driver gave a ppor cyclist whatever medical aid they could.

A few minuted later, an ambulance and a police car arrived at the scene. The policeman took some measurements of the road, They also took some passengers in order know how about the accident had happened.

The attendants in the ambulance took the cyclist to the hospital for treatment. As for the driver, he was sent to the police station for questioning.

It was a terrible accident. I felt sorry for the cyclist who was involved in the accident. I want to be careful on the road because it is dangerous.
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Last Sunday was a fine day. I was waiting for a bus at the bus stop. Suddenly I heard the screeching of brakes. I looked up just in time to see a car on the opposite side of the road ran into a cyclist.

The cyclist was bleeding profusely and groaning in pain. This awful accident attracted the attention of almost all the people in the neighbourhood. In a few minutes, there was a large crowd. A kind man immedidately ran to a nearby telephone booth and telephone for the police and the ambulance. Some of the passengers from the car and the driver gave a ppor cyclist whatever medical aid they could.

A few minuted later, an ambulance and a police car arrived at the scene. The policeman took some measurements of the road, They also took some passengers in order know how about the accident had happened.

The attendants in the ambulance took the cyclist to the hospital for treatment. As for the driver, he was sent to the police station for questioning.

It was a terrible accident. I felt sorry for the cyclist who was involved in the accident. I want to be careful on the road because it is dangerous.
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Vincent TeoPlease help me again!!

Last Sunday was a fine day. I was waiting for a bus at the bus stop. Suddenly I heard the screeching of brakes. I looked up just in time to see a car on the opposite side of the road ran run into a cyclist.

The cyclist was bleeding profusely and groaning in pain. This awful accident attracted the attention of almost all the people in the neighbourhood. In a few minutes, there was a large crowd. A kind man immedidately ran to a nearby telephone booth and telephone called for the police and the an ambulance. Some of the passengers from the car and the driver gave a the ppor cyclist whatever medical aid they could.

A few minuted later, an ambulance and a police car arrived at the scene. The policeman took some measurements of the road, at the site They also took some talked to some of passengers in order know how about the accident had happened.

The attendants in the ambulance took the cyclist to the hospital for treatment. As for the driver, he was sent taken to the police station for questioning.

It was a terrible accident. I felt sorry for the cyclist who was involved in the accident. I want to be careful on the road because it is dangerous.

I hope these suggestions help.
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Last Sunday was a fine day. I was waiting for a bus at the bus stop. Suddenly I heard the screeching of brakes. I looked up just in time to see a car on the opposite side of the road run ran into a cyclist.

The cyclist was bleeding profusely and groaning in pain. This awful accident attracted the attention of almost all the people in the neighbourhood. In a few minutes, there was a large crowd. A kind man immediately ran to a nearby telephone booth and telephoned for the police and the ambulance. Some of the passengers from the car and the driver gave the a poor cyclist whatever medical aid they could.

A few minutes later, an ambulance and a police car arrived at the scene. The policemen took some measurements of the road. They also talked to took some the passengers in order to learn know how about the accident had happened.

The attendants in the ambulance took the cyclist to the hospital for treatment. As for the driver, he was sent to the police station for questioning.

It was a terrible accident. I felt sorry for the cyclist who was involved in the accident. I want to be careful on the road because it is dangerous.

This is very good writing.

Some of your errors are just typos. Get into the habit of checking your writing to find typos.

Please post again if you don't understand any of my corrections.

Clive
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