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The table chart illustrates the information about Forest area in many parts of the World in 1990,2000 and 2005.
Overall, Euro was the largest of forest area in the world and the forested land in the world tended to reduced through 15 years from 1990
It is clear that the number of forest land in Europe increased sharply from 989 million ha in 1990 to 1001m ha in 2005. Asia showed a similar trend, which went up a 584m ha between 1990 and 2005.
By abstract, The figure for Forest area of South America reduced significantly by 64m ha from 946m ha in 1990. It was followed by Africa, that area reached 749m ha then reduced to at 691m ha in 2005. Otherwise, both of Oceania and North America showed a reduced steady trend of their Forest Area, which at 197m ha and 705 ha in 2005 respectively.

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Please attach an image of the figure you are describing.




I will highlight some obvious errors in your writing. Since you did not provide the figure, I cannot comment on all the problems. You can fix these mistakes and post the revised version with the attached figure.


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The table chart (I have never seen a table chart.) illustrates (This is probably a wrong word. ) the information about Forest (Forest is a common noun. In the middle of a sentence, it is never capitalized.) area in many parts of the World (common noun) in 1990,2000 and 2005. (spacing error)
Overall, Euro (Euro is the currency -- money -- used in the European Union.) was the largest of forest area (wrong phrasing) in the world and the forested land in the world tended to reduced through (wrong form; wrong word) 15 years from 1990 (missing punctuation)
It is clear that the number (wrong word) of forest land in Europe increased sharply from 989 million ha in 1990 to 1001m ha in 2005. Asia showed a similar trend, which went up a 584m (Do not put "m" after a number.) ha between 1990 and 2005.
By abstract, The figure for Forest area of South America reduced significantly by 64m ha from 946m ha in 1990. It was followed by Africa, that area reached 749m ha then reduced to at 691m ha in 2005. Otherwise, both of Oceania and North America showed a reduced steady trend of their Forest Area, which at 197m ha and 705 ha in 2005 respectively.

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Oh. So sorry. Now I understand. Thank you Emotion: big smile

Hi, thank you so much for your help. Actually, I try to attach the images like the way you show me but it's can not. Now, this is my edited essay:

The table compares the information about forest land in many parts of the world in 1990, 2000 and 2005.
Overall, the largest figures of a forest ranger in the world was Europe and the forested land in the world tended to reduce throughout 15 years from 1990.
The proportion of forest land in Europe increased sharply from 989 million ha in 1990 to 1001 m million ha in 2005. Asia showed a similar trend, which went up to 584 million ha between 1990 and 2005.
By abstract, The figures for the land of forest of South America reduced significantly by 64 million ha from 946 million ha in 1990. It was followed by Africa, that area reached 749 million ha then reduced to at 691 million ha in 2005. Otherwise, both of Oceania and North America showed a reduced steady trend of their stretch of forest,which at 197 million ha and 705 ha in 2005 respectively

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The table compares the information about forest land in many parts of the world in 1990, 2000 and 2005.


Your first paragraph is completely inadequate. How many parts of the world? What are they? What kind of "parts" are they?

"information about" : This is not good. What information is there? The diversity of the plant life? The number of hiking trails? The age of the forests? The types of trees?



Overall, the largest figures of a forest ranger

(A forest ranger is a man who works for the government and keeps watch over the forest. He can arrest trespassers, extinguish camp fires, and protect the trees from loggers. The "figure of a forest ranger" is the size and shape of this man. )

in the world was Europe and the forested land in the world tended to reduce throughout 15 years (Do you have the data for every year?) from 1990.
The proportion of forest land in Europe increased sharply from 989 million ha in 1990 to 1001 m million ha in 2005. Asia showed a similar trend, which (Incorrect usage. ) went up to 584 million ha between 1990 and 2005.
By abstract, The figures for the land of forest of South America reduced significantly by 64 million ha from 946 million ha in 1990. It was followed by Africa, that area reached 749 million ha then reduced to at 691 million ha in 2005. Otherwise, both of Oceania and North America showed a reduced steady trend of their stretch of (poor English) forest,which at 197 million ha and 705 ha in 2005 respectively