Topic: Modern buildings appear in large numbers, but some people believe that we should build our buildings in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

With the development of architectural advancement. nowadays there are more and more buildings have been established around the world to serve human need. Some people think that buildings traditional styles should be built instead of modern buildings. But in my opinion, I believe that modern houses are conformity with the urbanization trend.

First, it is obvious that the population in the world, especially in the big cities. So, building the big modern apartments the cites can hold the maximum amount of citizens. This is very necessary because it makes the speed of the urbanization.

Second, as the technology advances, building the modern apartments have helped the life of city comfortable. It is very easy to see that, each of apartment is equipped with not only the state-of-art housing facilities, such as elevator, air conditioning, but also the infrastructure like supermarket, gym, park,.. so there are very user-friendly and convenient. As a result, modern people now have accepted this new lifestyle.

Third, the living environment of the apartment is better than lining in the houses. It is clear to see that in the modern apartment, the living environment is more airy, always full of light and air. Moreover, living in the apartment means that people don’t have to face with the noise of traffic or industry.

To conclude modern buildings are a global trend as the economy grows, and this is very necessary for building the modern apartment. Only by doing so every city in all the world will develop and maintain the life of the city.

Topic: Modern buildings appear in large numbers, but some people believe that we should build our buildings in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

With the development of architectural advancement. (Repetition. Not a good phrase. It has no clear meaning.) ) nowadays there are more and more buildings have been established (wrong verb. We don't establish buildings.) around the world to serve human need. (wrong form)Some people think that buildings traditional styles should be built (wrong usage. We don't build styles.) instead of modern buildings. But in my opinion, I believe that modern houses are conformity (wrong usage. A house is not a conformity. ) with the urbanization trend. (unnatural usage. "trend toward urbanization.)

First, it is obvious that the population in the world, especially in the big cities. (fragment, incomplete clause.) So, building the big modern apartments the cites (ungrammatical. You have two noun phrases as subjects.) can hold the maximum amount of citizens. (unnatural. Use "people") This is very necessary because it makes the speed (wrong usage. We don't make speed.) of the urbanization.

Second, as the technology advances, building the modern apartments have helped the life of city comfortable. (ungrammatical) It is very easy to see that, (no comma) each of apartment (wrong usage) is equipped with not only the state-of-art housing facilities, such as elevators, (no comma) (missing word) air conditioning, but also the infrastructure (wrong word) like supermarkets, gyms, park,.. (Do not use ellipses, "etc." or "and so on" in formal essays.) so there are very user-friendly and convenient. As a result, modern people now have accepted (are use to?) this new lifestyle.

Third, the living environment of the apartment is better than lining in the houses. It is clear to see that in the modern apartment, the living environment is more airy, always full of light and air. Moreover, living in the an apartment means that people don’t have to face with the noise of traffic or industry. (I don't understand the connection to modern versus traditional styles of buildings. )

To conclude modern buildings are a global trend as the economy grows, and this is very necessary for building the modern apartment. (The topic sentence did not mention apartments. It asked you about the style of any building - office towers, hotels, housing, shopping centers, and government buildings. You did not really address the subject.) Only by doing so every city in all the world will develop and maintain the life of the city.


This is a modern apartment building (2016) built in a traditional architectural style:

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Nowadays, with the development of the urbanization and population growth, many buildings have been built to serve human needs. However, whether building should be built in traditional styles is a controversial issue. In my view, I agree that we should build modern buildings in a traditional style.

First, it is clear that many old buildings will be demolished, one reason for that they are old and unsafe to use. Another reason is that due to the population growth in all the world, especially in a big mega city so it’s very necessary to build the modern building. When modern apartment buildings are built in a traditional architectural style it is not only solve this problem but also improves the living standards of the local residents. For instance, Tokyo is a crowded city so housing problem is the most difficult, to solve this problem the government has allowed contracting skyscraper. Therefore, it very necessary to build modern apartment.

Moreover, constructing modern apartment buildings in traditional styles can reflect the cultural characteristic and the history. For example, The Bitexco Tower in Viet Nam is very famous because this tower is not only one of the three tallest building but also this design is a harmonious combination between traditional and modern architecture. This is a famous place for tourists when they come to Viet Nam.

In conclusion, we should build the modern apartment buildings built in a traditional architectural style. This not only improves the living standards of the locals but also reflect the cultural characteristic and attract tourists.