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The more countries develop are, the more life improve is, people think s differently. Some people belives everybody are assessed by social status and material possessions, instead of honour, kindness and truth.

On the one hand, there is no denying that materail is one of the most important things in the life. If you own a large amount of property, you can buy anything such as: for one night, castle, a person, emotion , event love. Unless you are poor, you only want to buy them in your dream. In addition, you are one people in the large social. When you live in an underdevelop country, you will be disregarded by other people.

On the other hand, i think that the way to judge a person depends on sincerity, kindness, and truth. To make this idea much clearer, i give two reasons. First and formost, the law of cause-and-effect is always exits. When you work well, you will have a good life. Conversely, you only receive contempt. Each year, there are many case of dog theft. Whoever stealing dog, the person wil be take to the police station, will be hit or will be killed. Secondly, human is usually interested in honour, especialy men. Loss of honour as same as kill themself. For example, none trust you if you lie too much.

Inconclusion, we can not living without material, however, honour, goodness are irreplaceable. Anyone is appraised not only material which they own but also their affection.

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red hat 125The more countries develop are,

The more countries develop are, (This is not a correct verb phrase.) the more life improve is, (This is not a correct verb phrase.) people think s differently. Some people belives everybody are assessed by social status and material possessions, instead of honour, kindness and truth.

I think you tried to write something like this: The more highly-developed countries become, the better the lives of its citizens become.

That is a sentence for very advanced writers.

I recommend that you write it in a simpler way: As a country develops, the lives of its citizens improve.

You did not post the topic question, but I cannot see a thesis statement in your first paragraph.

red hat 125On the other hand,

On the other hand, i think that the way to judge a person depends on sincerity, kindness, and truth. (Whose sincerity and truth?) To make this idea much clearer, i give two reasons. First and formost, the law of cause-and-effect is always exits. When you work well (hard?), you will have a good life. Conversely, you only receive contempt. Each year, there are many case of dog theft. Whoever stealing dog, the person wil be take to the police station, will be hit or will be killed. Secondly, human is usually interested in honour, especialy men. Loss of honour as same as kill themself. For example, none trust you if you lie too much.

The word " i " means the 9th letter of the alphabet in lower case. It is not a person. I don't understand your point in this paragraph.

red hat 125Inconclusion, we can not living without material

Inconclusion, we can not living without material (material what?), (run-on sentence) however, honour, goodness are irreplaceable. Anyone is appraised not only material which they own but also their affection. (I do not understand the last sentence.)

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