The tables illustrate the sales data of two different fairtrade items: tea and pineapple in five Europe countries during the five-year period.
Comparing the two tables, in 2010, sales of fairtrade-labelled tea and pineapples ranged from 1.6 to 4 million euros, with Austria the only outlier. By 2015, sales figures for both products had risen across the board, expect for Norway and Germany.
In two places, tea sales increased by a same small amount: 2.8 to 3 million euros in Germany and 1.8 to 2 million euros in Norway. However, these two countries showed a different pattern, with nearly one-million-euro falls in pineapple sales. Besides that, the increments of tea and pineapple sales were slightly larger in Netherlands from 2 to 2.7 million euros and from 1.6 to 5 million euros respectively.
Of the two other nations, the Austria’s fairtrade pineapples was the highest growth in both tables, jumping to 48 million euros by 2015; otherwise, France sales only rose from 2 to 6.5 million euros. By contrast, there was a more enormous increase in France than in Austria according to tea sales figure.
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Here is how I would word it:
The tables illustrate the sales data of two different fair trade items, tea and pineapples, in five Europe countries during the five-year period 2010-2015. [Use a pair of commas rather than a colon as "tea and pineapples" are an appositive which does not include the rest of the sentence. Also, give the years to complete the details in the opening sentence.]
Comparing the two tables, In 2010, sales of fair trade labelled tea and pineapples ranged from 1.6 to 4 million euros, with Austria at the upper end as the only outlier. By 2015, sales figures for both products had risen across the board, expect except for Norway and Germany. [You don't have to say you are comparing because it is clear that is what you are doing.]
In two countries places tea sales increased by a the same small amount: 2.8 to 3 million euros in Germany and 1.8 to 2 million euros in Norway. However, these two countries showed a different pattern in pineapple sales, with nearly one-million-euro declines falls in pineapple sales. In the Netherlands Besides that, the increment growth of tea and pineapple sales were slightly larger, going in Netherlands from 2 to 2.7 million euros and from 1.6 to 5 million euros respectively.
Of the two remaining other nations, the Austria’s fair trade pineapples was showed the highest growth in both tables [Do not say "both tables" when you are looking at each table, one after the other, unless you want to offer a general conclusion first], jumping to 48 million euros by 2015; otherwise, for France sales only rose from 2 to 6.5 million euros. By contrast, On the other hand, for the tea sales, there was a much greater more enormous increase in France than in Austria according to tea sales figure.] [Which was?]
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The tables compare the sales of fairtrade-labelled tea and pineapple in five European nations for the years 2010 and 2015. It can be seen that sales of both commodities increased in almost every country during the given time period, and Austria was the biggest seller of both tea and pineapple in 2010.
Austria and Germany were two major suppliers of tea in 2010, with 4 million and 2.8 million euros worth of sales. However, in 2015, the top position was grabbed by France with 21 million euros, and Austria just doubled its revenue in the course of five years. Meanwhile, Norway and Netherlands were the two least popular sellers of tea in 2010 with almost 2 million euros each, also stood at last in 2015 with 2 million and 2.7 million euros, respectively.
Austria was the biggest merchant of pineapple in 2010, with 16 million euros, and remained the same with almost 50 millions of revenue in 2015 too. In regard to France and Netherlands, pineapple sales almost trebled in 2015, as compared to their income in 2010. Norway and Germany, on the other hand, faced a reduction of just about 33% in their respective sales figures for 2015 when compared to 2.8 million and 3 million euros in 2010, respectively.
The tables compare the sales of fairtrade-labelled tea and pineapple in five European nations for the years 2010 and 2015. It can be seen that sales of both commodities increased in almost every country during the given time period, and Austria was the biggest seller of both tea and pineapple in 2010.
Austria and Germany were two major suppliers of tea in 2010, with 4 million and 2.8 million euros worth of sales. However, in 2015, the top position was grabbed by France with 21 million euros, and Austria just doubled its revenue in the course of five years. Meanwhile, Norway and Netherlands were the two least popular sellers of tea in 2010 with almost 2 million euros each, also stood at last in 2015 with 2 million and 2.7 million euros, respectively.
Austria was the biggest merchant of pineapple in 2010, with 16 million euros, and remained the same with almost 50 millions of revenue in 2015 too. In regard to France and Netherlands, pineapple sales almost trebled in 2015, as compared to their income in 2010. Norway and Germany, on the other hand, faced a reduction of just about 33% in their respective sales figures for 2015 when compared to 2.8 million and 3 million euros in 2010, respectively.
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When talking about them generally, you need to use the plural which is pineapples.
Meanwhile, Norway and [ 1] the Netherlands were the two least [ 2] popular sellers of sold less tea, in 2010 with almost at around 2 million euros each in the former year , also stood at last in 2015 with and 2 million and 2.7 million euros in the latter, respectively.
Austria was the biggest merchant of pineapples in 2010, with 16 million euros, and remained the same with almost 50 millions of revenue in 2015 too. In regard to France and the Netherlands, pineapple sales almost trebled in 2015. , as compared to their income in 2010. Norway and Germany, on the other hand, faced saw/experienced a reduction of just [ 3] about a third 33% in their respective sales figures, which went down to for 2015 when compared to 2.8 million and 3 million euros in 2010, respectively.
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[ 1]: Note the correct name of that country.
[ 2]: “popular” means: people like it.
[ 3]: “about” means approximately, so we typically do not use exact/precise numbers with it.
By the way, if it were not for the reply by anonymous above, I would not have seen your essay! In future, please start a new thread instead of tagging your text to an existing one.
