Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

In the modern world, technology has changed the way many people connect to each other. It has developed new various forms of relationships in our society, and it significantly influences how people socialize. In my opinion, this development helps many individuals to manage their connection in a good way. However, I think that it still has some drawbacks.

There are two main reasons why the development of interaction is positive. One reason is that internet-based devices allow business people to attend meetings in foreign countries. For instance, several applications can implement this function, such as Zoom or Google Meet. Furthermore, technology devices help people to reconnect with long-last relationship. A great deal of people lost their childhood relationships, they need these state-of-the-art ways for searching old contact. As a result, these meaningful relationships attach again.

Apart from the practical benefits expressed above, I believe that this improvement of interrelating still has some negative sides. Firstly, higher levels of technology use add up to significantly less time spend with others. This situation makes their relationships in all families to lack the emotional and close ones. For example, humans only notice their work from laptops and they forget to interact with their family members. Secondly, people only experience virtual relationships by using social networks. As a consequence, face-to-face meetings may decrease enormously.

In conclusion, modern devices have altered our social life and affected us in different forms. Although there are some disadvantages to this situation, many people can benefit from new types of relationships that they need.


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