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The given chart compares the number of travellers going to London Underground station at different times a day from 6 to 22 o’clock.

Generally, the number of people travel by underground in the station fluctuate during the above period, reaching a peak at 8 o’clock. Also, at 6 and 16 o’clock, this figure hits the lowest points.

Starting at a bottom with 100 passengers at 6 o’clock, this figure rises sharply to 400 people at 8 am, ranking first over the 17-hour period. Following that, there is a rapid drop of roughly 200 in the number of travellers from 8 to 10 o’clock. Before declining steadily to hit the second bottom at 16 o’clock, the figure for travellers experiences gradual growth from 200 to 300 people between 10 and 14 o’clock.

Entering the period from 16 to 18 o’clock, passengers go to the underground station climb significantly to nearly 375 people, followed by a decrease to about 125 people at 20 o’clock. Finally, there is a variation around 125 passengers at the end of the period.

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